Reviews for Stunted Forward Motion
Galaxia SH chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
This is one of the best fics ByaRen I've ever read! Thanks for sharing and writing. It's just perfect.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
This is such a sweet story. So sad and yet so hopeful. What a lovely read, thank you.
UnAnimo chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Wow. Best one shot I've ever read.
ActuallyNevis chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
So well written, so perfect. Thank-you for sharing.
Kyotine Neko 404 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
It looks like you will never stop to make me cry. I don't know what I can say to describe how much you're good with the words.

Thank you!

Niacy chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
It's really beautiful ans sweet.
FrostyFeline chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
*sniffle* this is so sweet! i love the way you portrayed the characters and well, the whole thing really. This had me tearing up in happiness! *million favs*
SantoryuuFelidae chapter 1 . 6/7/2011

This is great. Awesome. Touching. Wonderful RenBya fic.

And LOL at using fruit pastries to describe their love lives xD.
damncritic chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
hmm... i'm still deciding if i'm going to like this or not... because i really really hate renjixbyakuya, but i like how you wrote the story about them somewhat moving on... :)
Byakuya-Renji chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
omg i love this fic so much
Renn chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
LOVED this, and especially loved the conversations between Rukia and Byakuya
Bluishorbs chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Amazing writing. :)
skele-gro chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
This is so moving. ;_;
gonegonegonegongeoengrwiioegjw chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Sweet. Real sweet and real nice. The development is lovely, and the pastry is a cute add-on. I love Byakuya being contemplative and Renji seeming like a moody bum but whose moodiness is well explained later on.

And this sentence- "It’s awkward and tentative and comfortably sweet, as any real first kiss should be"- Loved it. Totally adorable, i swear. The whole bittersweet tinge in the story and the sweet sweet ending totally got me.

threehoursofsleep chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
That was lovely.
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