Reviews for Attack of Team Aqua
doc boy chapter 7 . 5/30
I really liked this last chapter and the ending. It was really sweet and well written making it a massive improvement in compare to the other chapters. Way to go buddy
doc boy chapter 6 . 5/30
I think the fight and their reaction was completely uncalled for. And if you want to create a beilivable romance between them you need build up for that. Otherwise people won't buy it. I'll give you a piece of advice though. If you want to maintain the quality of your stories try to avoid writing when you're not thinking straight. It might help prevent mistakes you might regret later on
doc boy chapter 5 . 5/30
Once again it's too rushed. You're skipping through the best parts like it's nothing and making it too easy for them
doc boy chapter 4 . 5/30
It was good but a little rushed. I felt like you could have put more focus on the drama when she was hurt
doc boy chapter 3 . 5/30
Here we go...
doc boy chapter 2 . 5/30
Pretty good. It's a little simplistic though. Could use more meat on its bones but it's cute nonetheless
doc boy chapter 1 . 5/30
Ah new bark town and goldenrod city... So many memories from those days and places... I played Pokémon gold growing up. It was a big part of my childhood. Over the years I managed to uncover almost every secret and grind it almost to the bone. With a little help from some friends. I remember when I found out how to get the rail pass for the train. Sure beats taking the boat. Or how to find and catch Lugia. Boy was that a pain in the ass. Anyway the story is good so far and I want to thank you for bringing back some fond memories of my childhood
Lover of Pokemon chapter 7 . 4/15/2015
Wow. A bit rushed but overall pretty great. Keep up the good work!
amanda bandanna chapter 7 . 7/22/2014
I'm sorry to say this, but this suuuuuuuuuuucked. The soul part was out of the blue and the battles were too short and stupid and so was the dad thing thing!
sharanya chapter 3 . 2/4/2014
it's actully evolves into a togekiss
IceMaster1928 chapter 7 . 12/11/2013
Very nice story with a good ending
AshxMay54321 chapter 2 . 10/19/2013
Hi this is good so far. I want some AAMayL in this come on
LukeDeath chapter 7 . 9/4/2012
Amazing!
Tighe Sofly chapter 7 . 6/16/2012
pleaseeee make sequel to this! i have just started reading these and this is my favourite one and i hope you continue to write AAMayL
Aviral Rastogi chapter 7 . 3/11/2012
It was the best advanceshipping story. I will continue writting advanceshipping fanfics.

Can u email sequel of this

my id is
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