Reviews for Life After Despair
Ginny278 chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
write more please i wanna know what happens next!
elliott ashes chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
Great job on this chapter! The descriptions were very well done. I especially liked ow the pheonix's song could be both sad and uplifting. You did a good job of portraying Harry's character especially. He seems kind of distant, like he probably would be after losing sirius and dumbledor. The only complaints I have are that there was some spelling mistakes in the description so people might not want to read it because they will think it has lots of mistakes (which it doesn't). Also, you used the word "him" and "he" really often, so sometimes it was hard to tell who you were talking about. Still, it was overall a very well done story, and i'm looking foreward to chapter 2! _ And... that's about all for my really long review! Oh yeah, and the idea of writing about Harry's dream was good, I hope you keep doing that in the future chapters because it's a really good way to show how Harry is feeling and what he is worried about and stuff.