Sorry, but Kendo unifroms can't be red. It's a traditional practise, and it's custonary to use a sort of really dark indigo coloured uniform. This is because of the special indigo dye used. It looks like navy generally, but if it isn't cared for properly can turn a musty pink. I'm pretty sure there's some point in proficiency where you can start to wear a kendo uniform that looks black than navy, but no red.

it's good, but Sanomi is WAY too much of a Mary-Sue! not to mention, butterfly wings? Samurai? golden eyes? I wuz all like, 'WTF?'

amazing!

great story

nice work but it could be better ( a lot better actually) keep practicing

ur a great writer X)

I love your sasuke story its so amazing i cant wait until you write chapter 31. i do not have an account on this site but i do have an account on quizilla so if you look me up there you can send a message back the name is twilightchick13

hi this is avonda alleyne. I read your fanfic,its a great,it will be great continued if you write it into the shippuden,besides the shippuden is lousy and boring. keep up the good work.

Hi my name is avonda alleyne.I Read your fanfic,and i like the fanfic,.Are you going to finish the rest of the chapters into the shippuden arc saga,because it a great me know.

Well, i started reading this fic a little while ago. I found myself somewhat growing bored with your OC. Her personality is bland to me, and she suceeds at almost everything she tries. In the future when writing an OC, I reccomend making dominant features in their personality, not just 'some girl' that fell into the naruto world and magically became a great ninja. Have your character fail a few times and don't give her the easy victory. Make flaws and good traits more predominant, I highly reccomend thinking out a character before writing anything. Please don't take this as a flame, I'm just trying to offer some constructive criticism.

OH. MY. GOSH.

You are an amazing writer. You do have a few grammatical errors, but other than that, I was simply enthralled by this story. It is so amazing. Agh! I must read more! -runs off to read the sequel-

Why start then? Anyway, please continue!

I'm a little confused...So this dimensions is over and you're staring another story that picks up where this one left off (basically a sequel)?

Anyways wonderful chapter! That was a nice twist (Sanomi being chosen as a baby to have the demon inside of her). Are you planning to have your story go along with the whole Naruto series?

i loved it! XD i can't wait for more!

YAY! DEMON! MUAHAHHAHhAHAHAAHA...SUGAR...MUAHAHAHA...XDD. I'm still hyper! MUAHAHAHAH! LOL. *GLOMP* Ur the best too!