Reviews for Loving School |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just then Gramps walked into the kitchen. “Oh finally found a boyfriend have you. I was beginning to wonder if you were a lesb…” Haha, nevermind. That is now my favorite line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “So how has my woman been?” I love that line. That must be my favorite line so far, because it just made me laugh out loud. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is actually okay. Is it your first story? Let me see... yes, it is! Why, this is an actually okay piece of work for a first time fanfiction writer! Sorry, I just get a little annoyed at REALLY BAD stories, and I was glad this one wasn't! Now, let's read on... |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! that was so cute. and no problem. i love reading stories on my freetime. either at school or at home when my older brother is off at least one of the computers. well g2g. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed at the akward silence but it needs more excitemant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *yawn* more excitement, drama, heated moments, and lemon please! lol im weird! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey that was a great story so far! keep up the good work. just make the chapters a little long next time. but other than that, that was great! loved it. |