Reviews for Road of Trials
Dragon's Return chapter 4 . 10/21/2007
I found this story by mistake and I nearly fell off the chair laughing after reading it XD If you ever get around to it, continue :3 lol
X chapter 4 . 8/23/2007
Icy Chinoumi chapter 4 . 7/21/2006
O.O Wow... Marth is acting suprisingly perverted! PDA. I remember I voted that PDA shouldn't be allowed in school. Oh... how I hope that goes into effect *evil grin*. PDA wasn't that bad in my fresmen year (Shoot... straigt and lesbian PDA right in front of me and I difn't care.) but now... everyone is trying to have sex without taking their clothes off in schools these days. I loved screaming "Live porn" just to make them stop. Anyway... Not much grammer mistakes that I can think of. I wounder what Ness, as well as everybody, will be like after the bodies are switched. God... the mayhem!
ShinseiSeraph chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
:D I wanted to check this out for some time. It's cool, and funny!

One mistake I noticed was that you used also twice in the same clause near the beginning of your fic.

I shall also R and R chapter 2 when I get the chance *nods*

*Ticks alerts and faves* ;)
R'N'Rer chapter 4 . 6/10/2006
Alright I would like to congraduylate on this somewhat amusing story.
Eternal Smasher chapter 4 . 6/6/2006
"Man, and I thought Roy was strong. Seems Marth was the top tier here..."

Did you do this on purpose? If you did, you're a friggin' genius.

(If you didn't, Marth is actually considered top tier while Roy is considered middle tier.)
Crystalicios chapter 4 . 6/5/2006
Oh Em Gee! Ell Oh Ell! That was so funny.
bijoukaiba chapter 4 . 6/4/2006
That was a hot chapter. I'm glad you updated!
Nanimonaimono chapter 4 . 6/4/2006
Double-ya tee eff, alright, memorized.

I think I didn't review chapter 3... sorry! But now I'm back! And slightly disturbed...

Yes, I really did the WTF thing out loud; the chapter was just too weird... I mean, Marth is just too weird, and he's scarying little kids! Serious PDA...

Still, wonderful writing! I really had a good time reading this; both cracking up and freaking out, I enjoyed it!

Keep up, and for Farore's sake... don't make it M rated... though, it'll be kind of interesting. Ah, no, ignore that comment!

bijoukaiba chapter 3 . 5/10/2006
OMFG, this is too funny! And Marth x Ness shonen-ai? Never seen that one before, quite exotic. _

crystalicios chapter 3 . 3/21/2006
Ahh... the pervertednes... hahahahahaha, funny!
Eternal Smasher chapter 3 . 3/20/2006
You may not be good at playing with words (I is), but it was still perverted. Cool and perverted.
Nijuu chapter 3 . 3/19/2006
Although that was very short, it was also very funny! As soon as I got the alert I knew I had to read it! Funny as usual, I like the way Ness (really Roy) thought they were talking about something totally different. I did something similar in my own story. Well, update soon, and the next chapter should be longer! The pervertedness didn't bother me btw.

~ Nakoya
Nanimonaimono chapter 2 . 3/9/2006
Why didn't I notice this was updated? WHY, HUH WHY?

*cough* Anyhoovs (lol), I'm expecting this to be updated soon. It was great, and fuck, what's up with Roy adjusting the cap so much?

I think Ness will not want to return to his own body, but Roy... I don't know. You tell me, you're the writer.
Nijuu chapter 2 . 3/3/2006
Ha I love this story it's so funny Please update soon!

~ Nakoya
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