What the fuck is that comment under mine ?

FUCK YOU WHO EVER YOU ARE, YOUR REALLY SAD, AND YOUR A SICK INDIVIDUAL AND ALSO THIS REALLY SHOW HOW HORRIBLE WOMEN ARE BY YOUR ACTIONS, I BELIEVE YOUR CHARACTER RELATES TO THIS SAKURA, YOU MAKE ME SICK IN THE STOMACH. YOU WOMEN, WHO KEEP USING GOOD MAN AS, SOMETHING TO BE USED WHEN ALL FAILS , MAKES ME WANT TO THROW UP, THAT IS WHY, I THINK TWICE ABOUT DATING, BECAUSE OF PEOPLE LIKE YOU IM ANNOYED AT THE PROSPECT OF BIENG USED BY SHITTY WOMEN YOU, FUCK YOU

I tried giving this story a go, but you would have to be a diehard SasuSaku fan to enjoy it. Meaning you love the characters no matter what. I say this because as a neutral fan, I found myself truly lacking any sort of sympathy for any of your character portrayals with the exception of Naruto. However your use of him as the forever fall back guy didn't help the story either. Your portrayal of him made me wish he had washed his hands completely of both Sakura and Sasuke and their overwhelming selfishness. Sakura didn't feel as if she grew at all, just got older and more accepting of who Sasuke is so she could hold on to those feelings she's always had for him. Because after all that was said and done he left her, again. She didn't make a choice to move on with her life, she was forced to by her circumstances. That's a stunted form of character development.

That was my biggest issue with your story. Overall you write rather well but I found your concept of growth in this story to be very lacking.

That ending sucked and you're a coward for leaving it like that. I regret even bothering with this, especially since the reviews weren't that encouraging.

You made Naruto Hokage, sure, expected, about time really, but you've still made him the story's punching bag for cheap dramatic effect.

Sakura is a complete and utter ingrate. I don't know others have praised you for your portrayal of her.

Still creeps me out he calls Naruto niichan.

OK...

I'd drop this fic if it wasn't short.

At least the cat is out of the bag now.

A couple of things.

How come Akio refers to Kiba as his uncle but not Naruto, also why the fuck is Sakura reigning in Naruto when Sasuke is the one being a presumptuous asshole that thinks he is entitled to anything?

Why does Akio refer to Naruto as his older brother? It's creepy.

Sakura has never been with anyone but Sasuke, despite only being with him once, seven years ago, and having Naruto to raise her child with her? That is fucking tragic.

Don't tell me Naruto hasn't moved on in the past seven fucking years. He better be with Sakura.

I think it's hilariously bad of Sakura to immediately think Naruto might help her raise Sasuke's bastard child after everything. He'll probably do it.