Reviews for Heir
Guest chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
Langara doesn't have the necessary infrastructure to support an internet like entity. 19040s era technology cannot manufacture computers of modern scale. Minor problem in an otherwise good story though.
PolarLuv chapter 39 . 12/4/2012
Great story :)
dp chapter 2 . 12/21/2011
JazzieG chapter 39 . 10/9/2011
Just 'found' this fic. Lots going on which is great.

If I may provide one piece of constructive criticism... You are using the word on in some of your sentences instead of in, for example "good sign on my book" should be good sign in my book. Something small I know. Sorry if it seems that I am being picky. Having said that as English is not your first language I am still impressed!

I hope you update soon.
blueoctober chapter 39 . 9/27/2011
:D I was so excited to read your newest chapter. Sorry I didn't review earlier when it was first posted. I had been on a trip and was without reliable internet for a few weeks. Just my luck, you post a chapter when I'm gone. It's been a long and slow process going through all the email notices I received. . Anyways, on to my review of your chapter... Loved the update! Really liked seeing more about Jonas' past. Very curious what Aris Boch will do with the bounty info. and really wished he listened to the recording... I'll be crossing my fingers he'll change his mind later... hint hint ;) Also can't wait to see what's Maya's agenda and in the gold locket. That ending you wrote sounded very ominous. Can't wait to read what happens next. I would have to say the wait was definitely worth it. It always is! Really liked the second update for the year and although you mentioned you have plans to finish before the end of the year... I kind of don't want to see your wonderful story come to an end but at the same time do... sigh. Please tell me you have plans for another story once you finish this one. Regardless keep up the great work and will be eagerly awaiting another update. :) Take care.
Kez-o the Brave chapter 39 . 9/18/2011
ohboyohboyohboy! You've updated! And oh such a wonderful chapter it was!

Thank you! It was a joy to read. :)
Kindered Spirit chapter 38 . 4/14/2011


Great story!
cocoblue181 chapter 38 . 4/8/2011
wow i am loving the story, cant wait for the next chapter
matute chapter 38 . 4/5/2011
You are back, great ¡ Beautiful chapter as always. Love the way you write. GREAT GREAT GREAT CHAPTER
blueoctober chapter 38 . 3/30/2011
:D You're back! This totally made my day. First though before I get into writing about your chapter. I'm very sorry for your lost and you have my condolences. I hope things get better for you. I'll keep my fingers crossed for you. Anyways, really liked this newest chapter of yours. Didn't think your writing was crap, thought it was good. Absolutely loved Jack finding the replacement crystal and it being the toilet one. :) Also really liked the whole conversation about where Malek is. Can't wait to see what happens next. As always, keep up the great work and take care.
freyda chapter 37 . 8/17/2010
whoa! it's so interesting, so well written ! good job ! come on please, I need to know what 's gonna happen ?
Flirty Angel chapter 1 . 7/16/2010

I have been reading this fic,I Like this JONAS! a very good story so far. I'm on ch20 and counting.

Great JOB! ...back to reading
matute chapter 37 . 7/15/2010
¡you are back!. Beautiful as always, I love Daniel and Jonas together, how great it could be, always remind me what the show lost. Love the picture of Jacob well he knows now how Jack feels regarding Daniel and Jonas. jejejejej

Great chapter. Hopping more soon.
blueoctober chapter 37 . 7/10/2010
:D I was soooooo extremely glad to see you finally updated this wonderful story of yours. The dialog seemed fine to me but I did have to reread the previous chapter to remember what had happened. Really liked Jonas and Daniel trying to convince Jacob into letting them stay. Absolutely loved how Jonas was carrying two EWCS, very sly of them. Have a bad feeling the answer to the question Daniel asked at the end is a no... since things would be far too easy if it was a yes and the two "gatecrashers" have the bad luck of having things become very complicated for them... ;) On another note, I just watched the Cure episode a few nights ago and liked how you including the episode in this chapter :) Also, although it was months ago, thanks for all your encourage for my exams, I managed to pass all of them. Anyways, thanks for the chapter again!
Flirty Angel chapter 1 . 5/17/2010

you have enough reviews to sink a ship here i like your work very orginal
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