|Reviews for Find Us Peace|
| eSJa chapter 18 . 12/28/2009
On one hand it feels very, very strange to be back here and "reviewing" FUP again, but hey new chapters (at least to me) demand it. :)
As usual your characterizations are spot on. The growth of Shion and Momo seems a little awkward, but that could be because it's been so long since I immersed myself in the universe, I am pretty sure that is it actually. However...I can easily see all of them saying and doing these things and it all fits. Especially Allen, bumbling into the door was so perfect and clear it was like watching it in 1080p!
Citrine showing up was a unexpected but a nice twist and a great touch having Jr use himself to bait her. She is such an undefined character but without Yuriev around to direct her it makes a lot of sense to need that connection with her brothers even though she fights it.
Nostagia not withstanding it was great reading your work again, and as much as we all find fault with our own work I still devour prety much anything and everything you put out there; yes I lurk your comics :P. So even though I know you will probably never get back around to it (and I am not blaming you in the least 3 years in any fandom would burn out the most hardcore fan), I am going to keep coming back and re-reading it because it is really good, and really good always deserves to be read.
| sithlorde1988 chapter 18 . 10/12/2009
This is looking pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.
| Larc chapter 18 . 5/16/2009
Godammit... this is the best xenosaga fic I have ever read... But the update date is on 2007? Wont you continue this? It's seriously good. Please continue this fic!
| JovialShogun chapter 18 . 6/13/2008
It is a great story. one of my absolute favorite xenosaga fanfics. it needs a good ending though. you can do it, I know u can. :)
| too-much-inspiration chapter 18 . 11/25/2007
This story is extremely interesting to read! I look can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Gabriel206 chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Are you going to update anytime soon?
| Gaignun Jr chapter 18 . 4/9/2007
Hi this is my first review for this story, I never get the chance to submit my review before because of the internet connection. 2 thumbs up for you! but i was wonderin' what took you so long to update the next chapter... and what happened to Jr. and Gaignun? i read the old version but it doesn't get any longer than the new one... anyway forgive the rash comment and grammatical error _
| Foibles and Fables chapter 18 . 3/5/2007
...congratulations, my keyboard is now covered in drool.
| Lucrecia LeVrai chapter 17 . 2/27/2007
You know, I find it really hard to review your fics, because just how many time can I repeat the following: I love your vivid writing style, the frequency of your updates, your ideas, cleverness and lots of originally mixed with plausibility, the way you portray every single character, your OCs, the way you can move from romance to drama to humor to angst with such ease... Heck, I love pretty much everything.
I guess you'd rather see some constructive criticism than a pile of monotonous compliments in your review box, but I can't help myself.
Bah, anyway! I've waited long enough, and finally, here comes another chapter about the URTVs. I was absolutely thrilled with the contents of this update. The first part about love, dreams and physical desire as perceived by Rubedo and Nigredo was just perfect. (I've always used to have similar ideas on this subject, but I would've never been able to write them down as well as you did.) Next, the bit about Citrine took my breath away. She's one of my favorite female characters in all jRPGs I've ever played (I've got a soft spot for cold-hearted women who can kick some serious ass), and I loved how you gave her so much depth in only a few paragraphs. The part about her killing the psychiatrist won't leave my head for a long time. :)
Now, I can't wait to see more of the plot. Please, keep working on this fic. Coming to think of it, I kind of wish your chapters would be shorter, yet posted more often. :)
| ReviewsGalore chapter 17 . 2/13/2007
Story: 7.5/10. You have some really intriguing ideas in this story, but I think that it takes an unusually long time to pick up. It was about seven long chapters before I could find a truly interesting plot that went beyond couples and it probably wasn't until about chapter 15, that I felt the story REALLY picked up.
Characters: 8.5/10. In general, I think you have a nice depiction of the characters. KOS-MOS seems right on and I like Jr. in the later chapters, especially. I think that a few of your characters come off a bit dull at times, but not always.
Creativity: 9/10. You have some really interesting ideas, such as the multiple KOS-MOSes, though I wish it had more of a driving idea behind it.
Writing: 9.25/10. Really nice writing. I like your use of detail. I especially liked the part in this chapter about Jr.'s dreams.
Believability: 9.25/10. I think that you manage to fit this story into the Xenosaga world very well, overall. A few of your characterizations come off as just the teeniest bit odd sometimes, but good job, overall.
Overall: 8.75/10. I think that this story is really well written and that it fits into the Xenosaga world nearly perfectly. My biggest complaint is that it seems to have trouble getting steam and I think that the story as a whole - beginning to end - could use a little more focus.
| Foibles and Fables chapter 17 . 2/5/2007
LOL, straightened up stiffly! Although not intentional, I laughed.
And I can't wait for this to continue, yay. LESS THAN THREE!
| Drake-Azathoth chapter 17 . 2/5/2007
O... Awesomeness. I LOVE Citrine. And Albedo's psychic sucker punch was adorable. ;)
I'm afraid the cartoon Durandal has me scratching my head, but I love the plotline thus far outlaid... Things are really starting to reach a point where my attention is riveted.
So kudos on the chapter, nnd hope to see more of the gang soon.
| eSJa chapter 16 . 1/21/2007
Even if you thought it wasn't your best writting, I still liked it alot. The characterization was spot on as usual and the pacing worked really well for the length of it.
The fact that you seem to weave it together so easily still amazes me. I know it doesn't come easy but it still is easy on the eyes. XD
| G-AnakinRPG chapter 16 . 1/20/2007
It was great
| G-AnakinRPG chapter 15 . 1/16/2007
Wow 100-series! This story is great!
Please continue it when you get the time!