|Reviews for The Chosen Girl|
| Kristine chapter 4 . 8/6/2014
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE THE STORY TO THE END! :'D.
| Chantal chapter 4 . 11/16/2013
Heey long time no update so please update PLEASE
Lots of love
| inuyasha116 chapter 4 . 1/17/2010
ahh u stopped keep going at least finish it with alternate ending anzu with bakura And anzu with yami
| Bara-san chapter 4 . 6/19/2009
did you just forgot about this fic?
well, I hope that you'll remember it, because i'm traped in it XD
sorry for the bad english, it isn't my first lenguage U
| LivingLegends chapter 4 . 11/12/2008
I can read it but there are a few grammar mistakes that anyone would miss. But other than that this fanfic is written quite well. I can't wait to read more.
| Chausten chapter 4 . 5/8/2008
Aw! He's so sweet...I feel sorry for him. I'll hug you, Atemu!
I admit it, you piqued my squealy fangirl interest with that little blurb at the end about Seto...will we be seeing more of him? (Beyond his obligatory random appearance as High Priest, of course?)
I hope you write more on this story. I wanna know what happens next!
| Chausten chapter 3 . 5/8/2008
'Kay, definitely take back what I said last review about the fairytales. :) I don't know that, if I were Anzu, my first reaction to finding myself face-to-face with an infamous thief king would be "Go away," but this is your story. Maybe on that note you just need to work on dialogue a bit. I think your characters talk naturally enough, but maybe you ought to work on fitting it more to the situation.
| Chausten chapter 2 . 5/8/2008
I feel like this is shaping into something extremely whimsical-like a fairytale, like I said before. Maybe I'm wrong, so I'll stop there till I've read more.
| Chausten chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
It is an interesting start. Short, so it's hard to say a lot about. There were a few places where I thought the wording was a little odd...and why is Anzu wearing a tank top, in Ancient Egypt? Oh well. But romantic in a fairytale way.
| takerschick chapter 4 . 4/12/2008
wow i love this tory. please update soon. can't wait to read what happens next
| ibtiamat chapter 4 . 2/21/2008
| ibtiamat chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
I KNEW IT!
I knew when I saw the title and Bakura that something like that would happen!
I HATE YOU CHIKUSHOU TOUZOKU!
| ibtiamat chapter 2 . 2/21/2008
Well, Anzu's Egyptian name is Teana.
And there was a rumour ever so often that Shizuka is Kiara.
BUT "I'm just sayin'"
It doesn't really matter.
Also Atem could either be spelt Atem or Atemu.
I refer Atemu-(It just has a more exotic Egyptian feel and sound to it!)
BUT IT DON'T MATTER.
*blush* "My big mouth" *slaps myself*
| ibtiamat chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
That was a great start!
| Sesshoumarufan20 chapter 4 . 2/12/2008