Reviews for Pick Up the Pieces
levysbookshelf chapter 11 . 4/14/2015
I loved it but poor Yuki! I'm glad Touya was able to help him.
Jenmoon1 chapter 11 . 5/29/2014
love it
Lupingirl chapter 4 . 7/16/2012
Oh my God, I'm crying! You made it so real... Grate writing indeed. Thanks for the story.
iewees chapter 11 . 10/8/2011
Hahah. Good job :D but I was really looking forward to the raping scene. ;( kinda sad you didn't write it in detail. But overall it was nice! :D
KuroNekoShoujo chapter 11 . 3/30/2010
I think I may cry...That was so sweet! Really, you did such a great job with the relationship between Touya and Yukito, and when Yue was telling Touya about why he ran away, I just wished I could give him a hug!

Incredible job! I absolutely loved it! _~
Pink Bead Girl chapter 11 . 1/15/2010
This piece of writing is so wonderful,so unique that I can hardly come up a description worthy enough to do it justice. You made the characters and their emotions so real I actually felt a physical constriction in my own chest as I read.

Thankyou so much for allowing us in to see your mind.
knightinred chapter 11 . 10/21/2009
nice work. like this :)
saitha chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
AH!

i read this a long time ago...but i really liked it!

i'm back to read it again, and once i've refreshed my memory, i'll leave you a more specific review!_

O_o but it's 'that time of the month' for me...so i'm all emotional...

this will probably make me cry...which is a good thing:)

it means your story is well-written!

yes, well, it is quite awful to rape yuki, and making yue a virgin?

ah, well, from what i remember, it all fits in very well, and touya does the best he can_

thanks for writing this!
kikijio chapter 7 . 4/29/2008
uwahh! Thank foodness for Touya-san TTTT
rowen raven chapter 11 . 3/31/2008
all right um its been about two years since this story was finished, so i might be a little late, but who cares i just found it out and read it. It was generaly sweet, a bit dark which is all good, thats how i like them but i would have put alittle more drama in to it, and i would have included yue more in the story, even if he shot himself out he most have been affected by what happened to yuki as well as by yuki's anger towards him. But all in all was good, even the cliche cheese lines touya used to 'heal' yuki were very fitting and sweet regardless of the cheeseeness, so it was good i enjoied it quite a bit, i just hoped a bit more tears but thats just my morbid mind, oh and hurray for kero trust him to get the job done, steping on the frog i mean. well, ja ne.
Minkira chapter 8 . 8/12/2007
i enjoy the story and it's very serious but i just had to laugh when you said yue was worldly. My relatives use worldly as another word for sluty XD
cdsmm chapter 11 . 7/2/2007
that was beautiful, angsty goodness too.. and Yue's reason for shifting forms during the rape was nothing of what i thought his reasons might be, ah.. poor yue, cheers for Kagedtiger! \0/ *throws confetti*
kawaii yuki-chan chapter 11 . 2/5/2007
WAH! I cried in the end...

Poor Yukito-kun...good thing he has Touya-san to help him reclaim his light.

Love it. Adding it to my faves list.
cYanwitch chapter 11 . 6/9/2006
Yay! Angsty goodness!

Brilliant with the character development. (And I agree, that really is so much better than action... must be why RENT is one of my favorite movies)

But poor Yuki...

cY
SwImMeR4LiFe chapter 11 . 4/17/2006
Hey...

I just read this fic and... well...

I LUBB IT!

It's way too angsty that's why I like it!

-swimmer4life-
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