Reviews for Three Brothers
hawani chapter 3 . 2/6/2016
I love it! Especially at the climax. I feel I wrote this story I would call it The Road To Madness but yours is much better.
Mrs. Misto chapter 3 . 9/11/2008
Morgana Wheatley chapter 3 . 10/9/2007
That was very good ,It works as a short story welldone
Munkustrapthecat chapter 2 . 8/22/2007
I really loved this was most likely to be one of the best Munk and Demi stories with a fight but not really discribing sould really make a secwal
Medilia chapter 3 . 10/19/2006
i have two words to say: UP DATE!
Tsuki-Tsu chapter 3 . 1/21/2006
Aw, it's over already? Well, it was a great story and I actually followed along with it pretty well, considering I'm not an obsessed fanatic like you(this is meant to be a compliment)! Oh, and though you did a good job on the fight scene ... you should have made it longer!
Bomba-Fae chapter 3 . 1/14/2006
aww I liked this part too.
Nabooru chapter 2 . 1/14/2006
At least you got rid of the bolding. Now could you try using more than one paragraph so it's actually readable? It's very hard to read one giant block of text.

This story is really short - all that happened in this chapter is a sort of generic "they see Demeter and Bombalurina and want to impress the girls" thing. Are the future chapters going to be longer and/or more intense? That would definitely help it be a better story.
Bomba-Fae chapter 2 . 1/14/2006
Bomba-Fae chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
KEEP WRITING!I wana no what happens with all off them!
Hyper Strudel chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
It looks very promising. Update ASAP! But don't make everything bold, okay?