Reviews for Shinobi Rebirth
SSTR87 chapter 2 . 8/4/2015
Assuming you wrote this before the official creation of Uzumaki Kushina, I think you channeled Kishimoto as your Noriko is a dead wringer, down to the hellish battle aura. That's damn impressive and you should be proud of yourself. Not many can claim that they created a character that became canon.

I mean seriously, violent, Tsunade student, number one kunoichi in the village, married to the Hokage, medic nin, scary. Heck if not for your inclusion of her in the ANBU you'd have a perfect clone. Shame you didn't copywrite it, lol
Guest chapter 11 . 5/30/2015
Well I am bolding you to your word,Ranma has a bloody past in this tale.
Lerris chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
This is apparently not a Ranma 1/2 crossover. Even neglecting the curse, which he doesn't seem to have, you have him doing perfect chakra control through water walking instinctively with never any chakra control practice, while early on having the reserves for high level fire jutsu, shadow clones, and high level earth jutsu, not to mention some kind of super memorization that is, at least in some cases, better than Sharingan assisted.

Ranma worked for his skills. I'm not really seeing that here, unless he is remembering them, and, well, he never had Chakra before.
shugokage chapter 11 . 4/20/2013
Interesting story!
Byakugan789 chapter 3 . 11/4/2012
Elemental and ninpou clones can be used like that by regular ninja, shadow clones cannot unless the user is a jinchuriki. The jutsu divides the users entire existing chakra reserve evenly between the summoned copies. dispelling the clone does not give the chakra back save the minor psychic return. Supersoldiers like jariya, pein, orochimaru, itachi and madera can only use shadow clones a couple times a battle and never in numbers, doing so weakens them too quickly. Ranma would die early in the battle from chakra exhaustion useing them like you suggest. He's not naruto keeper of the nine tails.
Byakugan789 chapter 2 . 11/4/2012
I'm confused here. Violent not quite sociopath and former professional killer from a deeply ingrained warrior culture is having a kaniption over her first son being a chakra adept? Naruto somehow managed to go through 6 years of an active ninja career without killing anyone and a good 60% of ninja never make it past being chunin who round up bandits... How is this making any sense? Naruto is considered universally weird simply for apearing reluctant to kill, how could your OC Kushina substitute even come up with the idea 'pacifist ninja'?

Ninja missions:
Guard duty-hold down the fort, stop people from passing by without permission; potential killing
Border patrol-extended guard duty; potential killing
Protection-you hold the safety of someone in your hands, usually someone with enemies; potential killing
Rescue of personel-Someone got stuck in a dangerous situation/was captured by an enemy; low chance of killing
Civil combat-You've been hired to round up criminals or bandits; high chance of killing
Kidnapping-someone is valuable to someone with money for some reason, you have to get them; potential killing
Inteligence gathering-find things rich or violent people don't want you to know and return; low chance of killing
Espionage-go break something that's probably guarded. explosions are a gimme; potential of killing
T&I-killing by accident or ineptitude, far more scarring than murder
Assassination-killing by definition...
Pasifist ninja? Fired or retrained 99 times out of 100

Ranma being able to figure out physical enhancement, wall crawling and water walking like a naturalat the age of three? reasonable for a Konoha genious. Ranma performing even a small Kuryuu endan at the age of six? BS. Thats several dozen hands signs, elemental manipulation, shape manipulation and high chakra useage all at once. Grand fireball, sure. dragonfire missile, no.
Byakugan789 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
please for the love of god let them be cousins or somthing. don't juxtapose ranma and naruto. far far to late to bother if you did, i know, but still...
Ranmaleopard chapter 11 . 3/6/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
Alabee chapter 3 . 8/19/2011
I like this story but I can't take it serious because it is freaking rediculous. They just make him a jounin at age 5 before even being a genin or chunin and then after that you have a paragraph about him stealing bread from Ryoga during 'school' which why the hell would he have gone to school in another village during the war when he was already a jounin that makes no gad damn since dude.
mythicalprogrammer chapter 3 . 4/25/2010
Mm... re-reading this. It's not bad but god mode and free power ups sorta made the fanfic less interesting. Have you read Taka's Messed Up fanfic? That's one way to do power ups. Usually heroes of stories go through trials and tribulations to get power and growth development which makes it more interesting. Meh, it's still a decent read.
johnceg chapter 11 . 2/4/2010
Hablo espaƱol, me hubiera gustado que siguieras con tu historia. Me gustaba. Espero que vuelvas a escribir pronto, si no este fic otro diferente.
I Tried chapter 9 . 9/16/2009
I really tried to read this, but... seriously. You have Ranma be some sort of ultra genius that becomes jounin before he's 5 or something. Then you have him sit around on his ass for ~10 years doing nothin, where the hell did his super genius once in a lifetime prodigy learning curve go? It was a little amusing at first and some parts are still somewhat amusing... but it really makes no sense whatsoever. Happy to see this is no longer updated.
a chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
HAHA! Glad this fic is dead.
angel61991 chapter 11 . 7/8/2008
interesting please update soon.
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