Reviews for What Happened?
TheyCallMeCyclone chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
love honey? lol, thats hilarious[:
Glinfaewyn chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Ok, this story had a lot of potential, but there are just a few things that I had problems with, namely the "tragic death of Hermione". Look, you don't have to like her, but killing her off with no explanation and no obvious reason isn't really necessary, especially since none of the characters seemed remotely affected by it. Also, your writing skills are a bit rusty. While there was nothing obviously wrong with it, a lot of the sentences seemed rather awkward. Finally, no self-respected author of smut should EVER, I repeat EVER, use the words "spunk", "love honey", and "love juice", because that just makes it seem amateurish. And nobody wants that. But you do have potential as an author. Keep working on it!
Nikoly Oley chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
Ok, I liked the story a lot. But honestly; love juice? It distracted me a bit
PrimevalChaos chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
XD love it! you better hurry up with the twincest or me and k8 will take over lol muhahahahaha
Ms. Dependent chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Is that all? Aww. I really liked it. I cant really find much Ron/Draco, its sad that this is complete. Good job