|Reviews for Complicated|
| Allura99 chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I enjoyed the banter in this story and I loved the tension between Peter and Harry when they are finally face-to-face. Harry's comment about Spider-Man not to worry about his father's suit was great.
However, there are a few inconsistencies that bothered me. If MJ knew that Peter loved Harry why did they get married (you mentioned their wedding in the first paragraph)? Also Peter seemed to move pretty fast from being completely in love with Mary Jane to willing to risk everything for his love for Harry. I think that Peter would have a bit more of an internal struggle.
Overall, though, it was a good story.
| Bruce-Willis-Love-Slave chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
This was really sweet. This was totally some of your best writing gone completely unnoticed. I'm so sorry that i was never able to read it. This was like, if you just changed the names this was romance novel on the verge of kill gay boy sex! hehehehe. Maybe you should write romance novels. hehehehehe.
Peace Love and Krycheck getting fucked up the ass by Mulder with a absolut Vodka bottle.