Reviews for All Lined Up and Carrying Flowers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was awesome! Roxane...so cruel. :-) Eh, they should take a hint when a man is standing in the doorway with a little girl that is a perfect mixture of him and Roxane, telling you "I AM HER HUSBAND"... Geez, people, what do they have to do, write it in crayon, skywrite it, maybe? And as a Dustfinger-fangirl (who has a Dustfinger wallpaper on her phone for pity's sake, and cried for three days when he croaked in Inkspell), I can say that Dustfinger was spot-on...I saw no OOC-ness whatsoever... LOVED IT! |
![]() ![]() I finde or found your Story Great i mean the part that i am understood ( i can't understand everything because i am from Germany and dont have learnig englisch a looooooong Time ) i am Sorry! You are a very Good writter ! My Gratulation ! LG Anna |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! I love this one. It's funny. I'm glad that Dustfinger did sounds like Dustfinger in the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE :D :D :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Love, love, love, LOVE it! :D Favorite line: "Me. Myself. I. Yours truly. He who is standing in front of you." |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! I love how Dustfinger listed all the variations of 'me'. -SG |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this story made me laugh. Poor Roxane with all her suitors. I can see Dustfinger standing out there now. And the line "Mummy! Dad says the idiots are your problem!" is great. |
![]() ![]() the A/N part also included paperclips! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was hilarious! Me like. |
![]() ![]() i liked your story. there is just one minor detail that was wrong. Dustfinger could not read until Resa(?) tought him. other than that it was very well writen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! cute story, very original idea. it's true-i don't think i've ever seen a story set before "Inkheart" well done! ~Ivy |
![]() ![]() Ha, good story. Tent-work, lol. D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm tempted to flame, just to watch the show. Lovely and funny - much goodness. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() funny! i almost fell outta my chair ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you said this is one shot but being from the USA i don't tend to listen. Can you write the next bit when Basta slashes Dustfinger-i like gory detail! |