|Reviews for The Fortune Killer|
| Elay grimm chapter 7 . 3/24
La historia es increíble aunque los no la sigas actualizando aora si Ángela trabaja por su cuenta y es buena
| angelwingz21 chapter 7 . 11/4/2006
UPDATE! this is really really good! loved it!
| Cypress Sunn chapter 6 . 8/27/2006
Cliffhangers have to be the evilest thing known to man.
Garth, by the way, seems like an ass. And Angela is going to choose him over Constantine? oh well... her loss
I never understood the chair thing when I saw the movie (i am a little slow sometimes) but I think you got it nailed.
But what happened to Omar ?
And I know you said Constantine wasn't in this fic, but where is he? While all this is happening, did he just crawl under a rock somewhere, oblivous to the rest of the world?
Puh-lease! update as soon as you can!
| Cypress Sunn chapter 5 . 8/27/2006
First off, is the character in the basement named Jack the same on from the "Crimson Child"?
And I figured there is some sort of link between the riot and the murder investagation. Call me slow but I can't figure out what it could be.
| Cypress Sunn chapter 4 . 8/26/2006
It feels like forever since I got around to reading this story. I'm glad that you haven't let lazy reviewers stop your from writing this!
To make it up to you, I'll give you a nice long review for every chapter! ;)
What I like about your writing is that you give your characters personality, especially Angela. And I love that your story has an actual plot. A lot of fanfictions are missing that.
| Cypress Sunn chapter 3 . 5/3/2006
Tell me you haven't stop writing?
Please, please, please continue!
| Cypress Sunn chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
Sounds like a great start.
Update soon please!