So, I love this story. This might just be my favorite of your stories; I don't really know yet, because I won't actually have finished it until after I've read Hisoka. But, this was a great idea, and you really pulled it off. A Muraki with no memory and no evil, but who still has a very complex and confusing character? Absolutely marvelous! And, as much as I don't like Kazutaka (who I really kinda liked) becoming Muraki again (which I was dreading the whole story), it works, and it provides a great lead in to the next story. I never thought I'd say this about a Muraki fic, but I really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait to read Hisoka.

Saoirse

Oh man. Hisoka's burned out and Muraki's one hell of a liar...

O.O; His family...now that's going to be surprising. Tsuzuki's summing-up of Saki made me smile.

Eek. I was expecting that, but it's not good. Poor Tatsumi. Good manuevering on your part, miss Jenna. You wanted palpable, as in touchable, not palatable, as in tolerable to taste.

Now that's a good twist! I'm pleased. Evil Hisoka? Lordy Lou. You wanted coalesce for the shadows, not convalesce. I wish Tatsumi the best in his recovery, and wonder politely what Oriya was wearing before he grabbed his kimono.

M...yeah, Hisoka's apparent attachment to Kazutaka has me dubious. It's too fast and unfounded. Oh, and, look at that, the innocence of new birth is gone, and he's back to avarice. Oh well...

Well, obviously Muraki is haunting the hospital. Certain people are proving dreadfully dumb. Our new hero is being quite a sympathetic character. My only complaint is that Tsuzuki and Hisoka have become the only important things to him, leaving him rather unconvincingly flat...but still, s'okay. Pretty good incorporation of quotes...of course, this is rather old by now, isn't it? Maybe I should stop reviewing.

Wow...a thank you...and an explanation...our Bon is being incredibly straightforward, and being not-messed-up by his history with Muraki to an incredible degree. I'd expect him to have more trouble and way more general suspicion, even being able to read emotions. Muraki can fake death convincingly enough, I wouldn't count on him not to manage false emotion emission. Hmm. Well, I still like the Kazutaka character, and Oriya, and you use details very well.

Aww, come on, now! He wouldn't completely forget Oriya like that! If he reacts to Hisoka, he'd react to Oriya...but, on the other hand, if he reacted to Oriya, he'd have someone to rely on, and we don't want that. Feh. Heh. I've always been fond of AmnesiaMuraki...Oriya's comment was on the ball. But although he seems to be mostly alright, his reason really isn't restored from whatever-this-was, because he's behaving most illogically. And Tsuzuki went and ran out on Hisoka. Aw man. Hmm...

ZOMG! I LOVE this story! It is BY FAR the BEST yami no Matsuei story I have ever read! XD I first read this a while ago, and then forgot to read the updates. It is amazing and I cannot wait to read the sequal! XD

Wow! This was a really good story and it was very exciting. But you ended it on a cliffhanger! Looks like Muraki is back to his old self. Poor Hisoka seems to have walked into a trap! Anyways, the sequal should be exciting (I haven't looked to see if you had started it yet or not).

OMG Muraki flavored Hisoka and Murraki dosen't give a rats ass about anyone other than Tsuzuki and himself. Oh, I pray Hisoka dosen't try to have a Murraki/Tsuzuki threesome, oh dear, oh my. Oh dear, oh my. Please don't end the story like this with Hisoka Murraki-tized, I'm a huge Hisoka fangirl. This story rocks.

Great! There's no better word to describe this, you fiction just GREAT!

whee! i love the ending! its so cliffy. hehe when will you continue? cant wait! or maybe i didnt look hard enough...great story yes!

EEK! what a way to end a ficcy! now i'm going to be mondo concerned about hioka! i'll be looking out of that sequel! i want to see if mu-kun gets very evil or not!