|Reviews for Perfect Entice|
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/17
Holy shit, this story is just amazing!
| nonmaden chapter 6 . 4/24/2013
sorry because i didn't review each chapter of your story.
at first, i confused because you described kouji like an uke. he's beautiful and feminine. i just can't stand uke!kouji (if his couple were kouichi). then you made lemon part, and okay, i could read this story.
i like 'my brother is undeniably sexy's part. when kouji fought with their father, i thought kouji was undeniably sexy and cool (how weird i am because i know that's bad).
i thought the last chap little bit strange. in 5th chap, kouichi should be go home with their mother, but then he went with minamoto family to the hospital. was it because the twin said that they loved each other?
how could psychiatrist do that to the patient? i mean like confront? that's way kouji hate her.
kouichi was so calm and kouji was very temperamental.
the ending... uh... it's wonderful story.
sorry for grammatical error. i'm suck in english. *deep bow*
| Alex Dark-serpent chapter 3 . 6/3/2011
Oh no. This is just great. The father comes in. The abusive, homophobic, violent father comes in and almost catches them fucking ...
| Alex Dark-serpent chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I have read this story before. At the time I did not have an account and did not know how to review. I was very new to the site and it was a few years ago.
I have my own profile now and you can read it if you wish. I shall try to review every couple of chapters. I know that people like them. I do them all the time but don't get responses back too often.
| black wolf-kot chapter 6 . 5/18/2011
You know I have been reading this fic for about two days (I was really busy because college) oh but it was worth it. Really good the way you write, is makes me feel like Kouji or Kouichi and thats awesome.
Now about the last chapter you wrote, it really impress me the way that...woman (to not say other things)can twist the words so easyly that make Kouji broke down in tears! It was so shocking! and the way Kouichi defend the love he feels for his 'touto-chan...but then...he screw up everything by telling Kouji he fears him...and now Kouji fears himself, and is just runing for everything and anything...he could get himself harm! runing all by himself while he is so emotional, like hited by a car o something...it just...god why they don't live them alone!
To pass to other things, seeying it was unfinished I went to your profile to see your other fics and end up reading the sequel, but well at less at the final moment the were together like it must be! But TT they die!
well is like 11:10 pm right now in my country and I'm so tired that keep end up writing the things in spanish.
God and what horrendous orthography ...
P.D: if I commit any gramatical errors please forgive me I'm really tires and english is my second language not the first so..
| Well that was cathartic chapter 6 . 8/30/2010
Noooo! Damn phsyco bitch! They deserve to go to digi-world, have little house, and live happily ever after! Noooo! Its like 3am now. Damnit, that means three hours of sleep b4 school. Damn it. Stupid digimon yaoi's keeping me up all night. Ah wells. I luv ur story, plz write more. cracked me up ALOT on the funny parts... I wanna be a digimon JUST so i can digivolve and bitch slap the dad and step mom. But espsceially the dad. Skittlemon digivolve to... BITCHSLAPMON! Take that you bastard! soryy... carried away...
| Skye-Yue chapter 6 . 1/14/2010
OHMEHGAWD! PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY! Its Beautiful, and wonderful and amazing! !1
| Blaze Snow chapter 6 . 1/11/2010
You might be right about Kouji's temper
love ya loads
| PinkFloydLady7 chapter 6 . 1/7/2010
finish i say, finish.!
| ReimeiOokami chapter 6 . 8/20/2009
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS!
I LOVE KOUKOU AND THERE AREN'T MANNY FICS AROUND AND I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!
| Kaizer kun chapter 6 . 8/14/2008
I love this fic theres not nearly enough KouKou in the world but could you work on your spacing adding more paragraphs and such because its hard to read so smushed up other than that good work
| The Phoenix Rose chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Space the text out more, its really hard to read when its all bumbled together like that
| toppyoushimonai7 chapter 6 . 7/6/2008
I love it! You're a really good writer!
| LazyAfternoons chapter 6 . 3/6/2008
I love this story! It is incredibly well written and KouKou is so under-used! All-in-all I can't wait for an update!
| StrawberryParfait chapter 6 . 2/18/2008
Wow...I'm DYING to know what happens to Kouji. I can't believe it, Kouichi ran to HER? xD
Please continue! This is the best Koukou fic I've EVER read.