Reviews for Betrayal
jj chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
susan chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
please keep writing
Halan Lore chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Well Iruka's scar... I've always thought it was from Kyuubi's tails or tail...
Not-HereXXX chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Aw, sad! T_T

I love it!
Tomboy 601 chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
I thought it was one of the better stories here. I don't know how Iruka got that scar either!
niver chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Lovely. So sad.
CandyGirl999 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
This is really sad, the ending made me tear a bit.
Sai Ya Xiao Jie chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Wow. Wo de tian a... That was beautiful. I swear I've never seen a Mizuki fic like this one, and it actually ties into the real storyline very very nicely. Put simply, I LOVED it

Keep writing pieces like this one, and I'll be back for sure to read XD

Xie xie ni,

Shui mu de xiao jie
Necifix chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
I got bored and looked up Mizuki. Only 3 stories! Love it!
STUPIDHUMANZZ chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
Is this a oneshot? Too bad, it was really good. But I guess I understand why it had to end this way. I must say I love your story. Seldom do I find any Iruka fics of merit but yours just so happens to be one of them. It was superbly written thought the one part that sounded awkward to me was Mizuki's ending dialogue. But that's just a minor greivance, the rest was perfect!