Reviews for WI: Encounter
Dark-Wiccan-Goddess chapter 8 . 3/1/2006
I dislike you now! i demad is write me or at very least write in some b/a smochies!
lessthanangelic1 chapter 8 . 2/10/2006
wow...that's kind of harsh...i kind of liked this fic...
Queen Boadicea chapter 8 . 2/10/2006
Dang! I hate when authors do that. :(
Queen Boadicea chapter 7 . 2/1/2006
I'm not opposed to evil writer fun (I attack one of my fanfic characters on a more or less regular basis). But a little run-through with Spellcheck every now and then doesn't hurt.
Queen Boadicea chapter 6 . 1/24/2006
Hm. Would an out-of-control Angel be Liam during his frat boy youthful days of whoring, drinking and stealing or Angelus the stalker and homicidal psychopath or souled Angel going crazy, trying to re-connect with Darla and killing criminals? The mind boggles.
Queen Boadicea chapter 5 . 1/23/2006
I like the bonding between Buffy and Willow here. It's one of the things that was sorely missing in the latter seasons of BtVS and what made the show almost unendurable to watch.
war90 chapter 5 . 1/22/2006
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Buffycoo999 chapter 4 . 1/22/2006
Please Continue
Allen Pitt chapter 4 . 1/22/2006
Pike needs to either get a life or move to Sunnydale-would be great if he did move, since Angel is on his way to LA (probably) soon enough... Willow as a slayer is actually kind of weird, maybe TOO powerful if she keeps up with the magic studies... might go nuts earlier... what if SHE ends up killing the deputy mayor by mistake, and goes off the deep end 3 years early?
Queen Boadicea chapter 4 . 1/22/2006
Buffy's reunions with her friends and Angel come off as a little flat and it took me a moment to figure out why. You don't put enough "dressing" in this story. You need to give some background detail-setting, furniture, clothing-and emotional expression. I get some idea of Willow's unhappiness and loneliness but not enough background story to show WHY she would be so lonely. Doesn't she have Xander as her best friend since childhood around to be with her? Has he been neglecting her since she became a Slayer? Has he been crushing on other demon girls-again? How does Giles feel about Buffy being gone for so long? Maybe you could fill in the gaps in subsequent chapters.
Queen Boadicea chapter 3 . 1/19/2006
So Willow's the new Slayer? Well, she can't do much worse than Faith and she has Buffy for experience and Giles for teaching. She's going to kick butt. (What the heck is up with NOW? I saw a pop-up called a Review Throttle telling me I had to wait 30 seconds before posting a new review. Since this is my FIRST review for the last two days, that was annoying. Sometimes I get so frustrated with this site; why doesn't everybody just quit or protest? Sheesh!)
Buffycoo999 chapter 3 . 1/18/2006
Please Continue.
Allen Pitt chapter 3 . 1/17/2006
I for one am mad as hell... just kidding... Willow as a slayer actually is interesting -it's probably what she always secretly wanted- she never quite 'got' the sacrifice part of it, only saw the power- note that little speech in season 3 about how she was going to make it her life's work (fighting evil) -and couldn't quite understand why Buffy didn't want that kind of life... she might find out why now- it's one thing if you can choose to do it, it's another if it chooses you, and there's no retirement plan...

anyway-poor Angel...
Buffycoo999 chapter 2 . 1/17/2006
Please continue.
Queen Boadicea chapter 2 . 1/17/2006
Angelus going wild? That is strange. He tends to play it cool unless he's beating up Spanky.
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