Reviews for Of Strength and Weakness
Ioga chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I read this at an airport, and it rather fit the slightly homesick grayish mood. :)

If I can think of any critique, I felt the rest of the story would maybe have worked out even better if the dream-like flashback she had wasn't "sent" (or implied to be) as a nudge from anyone, but rather just flowed from synchrony between the characters - she's thinking of him while he's thinking of her because of something that triggered them both, maybe.

Thanks for this!
onlyluna chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
u shouldn't say written out of guilt.. it was a feast for me.. thanx
Bunko08 chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
A) Great

B) Adorable

C) Well-written

D) Miraculous

E) Wonderful

F) Perfect

G) All of the above

Answer: G
HinataMorningstar chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
yeah i like this one better than the other. its not as sad!1
Moon FirexxXXxxMitoko Dreamer chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
u wrote a dead shino? i must read this stry! but if u did im sure this mor then makes up, BEACAUSE ITS SO KAWAII!

Moon Fire
FirstBornofMainHyugaHousehold chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
So, Shino isn't dead, is he? Sorry, I'm confused... T T Great job, and happy holidays! I like this pairing! :D
randomangel chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
You are forgiven. Awesome job!
ms. phishy chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Wow, a ShinoHina fic where Shino is actually kept in character! This was very well done; I really enjoyed it! ;-)...
rrlauo chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Made it up!how sweet...
kikofreako chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
cough I've been wanting to review this for a long, long time, and I finally can! (hurray!)

The plotline ws extremely original and the part where Naruto seemed to telepathically communticate with Hinata blew me out of the water! You also used the flashback very well, not just reiterating what happened.

You have a great vocabulary in addition. The thing that really drives that home is that you don't overuse huge words just to try to make a point or sound smart: it's clear that it comes naturally. They blend very well with the similies and metaphors in the story and support everything that the characters do.

All in all? Freakin' amazing. You deserve a plate of cookies.

Akiko
Heatman1991 chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Dude, this story really... no very good, I have always been a Shino/Hinata fan but reading this made me like it more, I thank you. *Salute*
blackhaze666 chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
okay, i forgive you yay! *sniffles*
sakiya chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
hm, very good. very very very good! very very very very very... you get the point i like it and i haven't read the other one with a dead shino.
whitealmond chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
You kept everyone IC and wonderful _ *favs you*
Vanessa chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
OMG that last line (Because you are strong...and only a strong woman can make me feel this weak) so cute! OKAY! I started first loving Kiba and No I think I'm in love with Shino! Good JOB!
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