Reviews for Shadow's Rising
Yuuki Toshi chapter 8 . 3/20/2006
aw, go kakashi and the inner voice! update soon plz!
naash chapter 7 . 3/12/2006
love the angst
White Alchemist Taya chapter 7 . 3/12/2006

kakashi needs to learn to control his hormones dude!

update soon!
pookie-77 chapter 6 . 2/21/2006
ZOMG Ikaru - chan, you SO ROCK.

((gets whacked over head for the "-chan"))

Well, anyway, keep it up! PLZ. For the world's sake.

((laughs at Yamiko for reviewing))

BTW, not to sound ... evil ... or snotty ... but it's spelled "Sharingan". ((gets whacked again))
naash chapter 6 . 2/21/2006
actually I rather like this one. It's really good.
Innogen VorwandKlugheit chapter 5 . 1/30/2006
nice story its new by the fact that the oc has a odd history compared to the other storyd that i've read. Wicked Plz update soon.
MKLlim chapter 5 . 1/30/2006
hhmm.. Nice description on Yamiko's part (grins). I like the way you slowly progress things (cuz most authors fly through the whole story and make the plot really obvious, plain and.. well.. short) Although maybe you're progressing a little bit too slowly? I don't think you need to repeat half of the previous chapter with a different point of view. You could just add a bit more variety to it- for example- not repeating everything that's been said. You could just describe the other person's response- that way you could go on with the story without having to repeat a lot. Anyway, I'll be waiting for more updates! you can count on my reviews ;) Go write the next chapter!
bisha chapter 5 . 1/29/2006
update soon.
PimpTroyce chapter 3 . 1/16/2006
ohh I'm liking this! update soon!
Meinos Kaen chapter 3 . 1/16/2006
It's interesting. Continue, please.
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