|Reviews for Shadow's Rising|
| Yuuki Toshi chapter 8 . 3/20/2006
aw, go kakashi and the inner voice! update soon plz!
| naash chapter 7 . 3/12/2006
love the angst
| White Alchemist Taya chapter 7 . 3/12/2006
kakashi needs to learn to control his hormones dude!
| pookie-77 chapter 6 . 2/21/2006
ZOMG Ikaru - chan, you SO ROCK.
((gets whacked over head for the "-chan"))
Well, anyway, keep it up! PLZ. For the world's sake.
((laughs at Yamiko for reviewing))
BTW, not to sound ... evil ... or snotty ... but it's spelled "Sharingan". ((gets whacked again))
| naash chapter 6 . 2/21/2006
actually I rather like this one. It's really good.
| Innogen VorwandKlugheit chapter 5 . 1/30/2006
nice story its new by the fact that the oc has a odd history compared to the other storyd that i've read. Wicked Plz update soon.
| MKLlim chapter 5 . 1/30/2006
hhmm.. Nice description on Yamiko's part (grins). I like the way you slowly progress things (cuz most authors fly through the whole story and make the plot really obvious, plain and.. well.. short) Although maybe you're progressing a little bit too slowly? I don't think you need to repeat half of the previous chapter with a different point of view. You could just add a bit more variety to it- for example- not repeating everything that's been said. You could just describe the other person's response- that way you could go on with the story without having to repeat a lot. Anyway, I'll be waiting for more updates! you can count on my reviews ;) Go write the next chapter!
| bisha chapter 5 . 1/29/2006
| PimpTroyce chapter 3 . 1/16/2006
ohh I'm liking this! update soon!
| Meinos Kaen chapter 3 . 1/16/2006
It's interesting. Continue, please.