I have never seen such a real and emotional story. You did absolutely great on it. It makes me feel like I've seen an actual Jem episode.

Dum dum duuuuum. He finally knows the truth. Good job on showing how he can be a twit at times and how Jem or Jerrica can be pulled in seperate paths because of her actions.

Cute. I wonder what his reaction to Synergy would be.

Jem is a celebrity. So is Jerrica Benton. They can both afford to have a two-timing boyfriend, since news is news, regardless of whether it is good or bad. Being a celebrity means you have to thrive on what might be termed gossip, since the normal rules of polite society are different when you are rich and famous.

again! cute. story

ps. please have a new story out soon!

that was cute. but i'm a little mad! why didn't rio kiss, jerrica?

ps. idea. synergy is a woman for a Day or 2

it's all your if you like? _

I like it. It's a very intriguing way of having the truth come out. :) Very good.

sarah

This is a very nice little fic. It was like reading a breath of fresh air, the whole take on the Rio-finds-out-about-Jerrica/Jem situation was written with a straight-forward voice and a sweet attitude. One word of advice, though, is that you might want to watch out for keeping your dialogue fully in quotation marks next time. :) But it's always nice to have a new writer here in JEM's circle and I hope we see more work from you in the future.