Reviews for Show's Over Synergy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have never seen such a real and emotional story. You did absolutely great on it. It makes me feel like I've seen an actual Jem episode. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dum dum duuuuum. He finally knows the truth. Good job on showing how he can be a twit at times and how Jem or Jerrica can be pulled in seperate paths because of her actions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. I wonder what his reaction to Synergy would be. |
![]() ![]() Jem is a celebrity. So is Jerrica Benton. They can both afford to have a two-timing boyfriend, since news is news, regardless of whether it is good or bad. Being a celebrity means you have to thrive on what might be termed gossip, since the normal rules of polite society are different when you are rich and famous. |
![]() ![]() again! cute. story ps. please have a new story out soon! |
![]() ![]() that was cute. but i'm a little mad! why didn't rio kiss, jerrica? ps. idea. synergy is a woman for a Day or 2 it's all your if you like? _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. It's a very intriguing way of having the truth come out. :) Very good. sarah |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very nice little fic. It was like reading a breath of fresh air, the whole take on the Rio-finds-out-about-Jerrica/Jem situation was written with a straight-forward voice and a sweet attitude. One word of advice, though, is that you might want to watch out for keeping your dialogue fully in quotation marks next time. :) But it's always nice to have a new writer here in JEM's circle and I hope we see more work from you in the future. |