Reviews for Choices
musicalgirl4474 chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Oh wow... that was intense! Very well-written.
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
This is fantastic. I was not really expecting something this... dark and twisted. But it's very easily where the story could have gone and I loved seeing how you wrote it.

It was written very, very well. I could see everything playing out in my mind and emotions were simply incredible.


The Terrible Jester chapter 1 . 12/26/2011

This is just... wow. Painful to read. Not because it's bad but because the emotions and descriptions are so vivid, which is definitely a good thing.
Lady Tiger Lilly chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Wow... So dark! I LOVE IT! Ah, how I love the pain and the defiance. Dont listen to the scared little weaklings that so hate the bitter reality; it was brilliant.

Just bloody brilliant...
Chehero chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
cheers to you for undertaking such a harsh story line and pulling it off superbly. I really do love this story. i love all your dark fics but for some reason I don't understand the cloth. maybe it's juts me but just because the last bit through me doesn't mean i didn't love the piece. ;)
Bella chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Wow! I'd love to see what happens next. So sad!
Swanwhite of narnia chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
*Sniff* * takes out the 50th hankie and blows nose* *stares shocked at the screen* speechless. The image of Edmund, across his brave brother's ...I wont say ? *cries of agony and despair* why did you have to kill him? Ok, fine thats too much. The effect of all your stories still haunts me.
lifechiaroscuro chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Dark, but... it's undescrbable, sometimes, stories like these. So full of emotion... it's magnificent.
lovesFanFic chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Wow. That was really intense. Seems consistent with the characters... still. wow.
88Keys chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
That was a sucker-punch of a story. Very dark, but very well-written.
Highqueen Julietta chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
ouch... *sniff*

I luv your style of writing... it makes the story come alive!

THIS WAS SO good and angsty...

Linz the Reader chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
that was umm... how shall I say different I liked it though sort of in a creepy sort of dark way good piece of writing though and kudos on how you wrote Jadis wow so umm.. yeah I have to go have some nightmares now
Wildfire2 chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
That was really sad... I didn't like it!... but that's not true. I DID like it. A LOT! It was wonderfully written but SO SAD! Poor Peter... Sweet noble Peter...

LunaNigra chapter 1 . 1/18/2009

Good one, but dark. like you said!

Dawgabs chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
that. was. beautiful.

I absolutely loved it. It was gorgeous! It is harder than you'd think to find well-writtn angst/horror/tragedy fics. That aced them all. I literally could not wrap my mind around the depth of their emotions and angst in that story. It is nothing short of incredlible.
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