Reviews for Technius 30
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 4 . 7/11/2009
Great story.
Angel Frog chapter 4 . 4/23/2006
This is a really good idea, but there is one thing that you should probably fix. You use 'then' a lot and it makes the story feel kind of awkward. Especially the fight scenes.
phantomshadowdragon chapter 4 . 4/1/2006
Kid Flash let Danny overshadow him? Cool. :) Technus still talks to much. :) again the villians have been defeated :) Danny's normal day. :)
phantomshadowdragon chapter 3 . 4/1/2006
Technus seems to be acting smarter in this and not trying to be "hip". Intangable. :)
phantomshadowdragon chapter 2 . 4/1/2006
Uh oh. This is not good.
phantomshadowdragon chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Cool. Control Freak is funny kinda like the Box Ghost but not as annoying and not as funny. I wonder what's going to happen with Technus?
Shiva the Sarcastic chapter 3 . 2/12/2006
Great story. Please update soon.
Shiva the Sarcastic chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
FANTASTIC! Keep up the good work. I want to know where you're going to go with update soon.
JacksNight chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
nice. update soon plz.
SilverstarsEbonyskies chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
Intriguing. This a very interesting idea you have thought up. I'm looking forward to more.