I keep being in love with your Baralai. He's what I *wish* Square had done with Isaaru: a Yevonite with wisdom to see the truth behind the lies.

Amazing that a story where Lai lets the Yevonites be rude to Gippal, doesn't speak up for him, still shows the love between them. This works. It's complicated. It's not perfect.

this fic is so so very good. breaks my heart, it's beautiful.

aw, when he said made love, it disappointed me that u didnt write the scene out. but i still like this story. sweet romantic.

Aw. Seriously. This is perfect. The punch to the gut, the whispered meeting place, and slipping up against each other like that - it fits them perfectly. I loved the imagery of them by the fire together, getting closer as the night wears on...

Masterful work here. I loved reading this! fav

Great job with this. It made me cry! and the ending was so very sweet.

Cute!

Aww, this made me smile. Nice fic

hnn.. i like that one

it's nice to read fics without all this action stuff. people forgot how to write short ones with a plot.

realy nice fic.

E! They're fun! I just like them...

I like the way you did the first person point of few good job and good story plotline keep up the good work.