|Reviews for Evolution|
| stainedxcherryblossom chapter 4 . 10/20/2015
The last part killed me...
| stainedxcherryblossom chapter 3 . 10/19/2015
I'm dying with sadness and grief...this is the most depressing part of the story...I can even picture Sasuke and Sakura in my mind and their parting moments... :'(
| stainedxcherryblossom chapter 2 . 10/19/2015
| jhian casey chapter 10 . 6/14/2015
damn good! awesome job, mitsuki!;)
i just hope you went a little more detailed of the lemon part here.. some fics are so, so thorough in writing the lemon scenes and haven't removed their work yet..hehehe..
just a thought, though..;)
looking forward to salvation baby! thanks!;)
| ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 10 . 3/20/2015
He's aliiiiiiiiiiive! :D Great so far, can't wait to read the last installment.
| Amy chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
I'm loving this trilogy so far (haven't started Salvation yet, though)! You are an amazing writer, one of the most original in a long time. I cried when you killed Deidera! I love DeiSaku as much as ItaSaku, and it would be interesting to read a story involving ItaSakuDei where Deidera wins her over, which is so rare. :( I also wanted to read the lemon *blushes* but I don't have a LiveJournal, although I am over 18 so it's legal haha.
| Inanari chapter 10 . 3/27/2014
Oh my, is that deidara I hear? Bad itachi for lying to Sakura.
| Bleuboo2013 chapter 9 . 11/21/2013
I bawled my eyes out reading this chapter T-T
| Bleuboo2013 chapter 2 . 11/21/2013
I read them! :D I find authors notes informative and entertaining lol Love the story so far btw! As much as I like Sasuke, I have a anime-love for Ita-sama and would prefer Sasuke-kun not to get in the way of their love :) But that's just me
| Syren chapter 10 . 9/26/2013
MitsukiShiroi - san
Your story has been nothing but captivating... I will most likely be re-reading again, as well as reading Salvation and all your other fics :) I have to say though, you are the first writer I have encountered, to cordon off your sexual content on this site... While I can understand your qualms and commend you for the action you take, lol, I feel so disappointed that I can't read some good Itachi on Sakura goodness! Hahahaha [blushes] Sadly, I am not a part of LiveJournal. Anyway, I can deal :D Your fics are awesome! Keep up the good work :)
| BoomPowMina chapter 10 . 7/31/2013
W-what? Dei...dara? Please...please, please, please be alive, and not some stupid jutsu..PLEASE DEIDARA! D':
Calm down, breathe Mina, BREATHE DAMMIT! Oh look...im crying again...You probably noticed that i am EXTREMELY emotional, but this many times is not normal man...
THEY WILL MEET AGAIN DAMMIT! . It is time to go to sleep...see yah tomorrow, when i continue to SALVATION! :'D G' Night
| BoomPowMina chapter 9 . 7/31/2013
Did that really just happen? YOU KILLED HIM YOU BASTARD! I AM CRYING MY EYES OUT NOW! YOU KILLED DEIDARA! NONONONONONONONONONONO! HE CANT DIE AGAIN! NOOOO! I HATE YOU TOOYA! DEIDARA NOOOOO! DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD': WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH DEIDARAAAAAAA YOU ARE GONE AGAINNNNNNNN! Ahem. I am gonna go weep in my closet now...
Dammit Tooya, i was fangirling over you, and you kill my favorite character...you bastard...but you still are the awesomest OC out there...BUT I HATE YOU FOR KILLING DEIDARAAAAAAA WAAAAAAAAAHHHH HOW COULD YOU JUST GET KILLED DEIDARA!? God dammit, i am gonna go wash my mouth, it was fangirling... unacceptable! Stupid mouth...
Rest in Peace Deidara, I love you :']
| BoomPowMina chapter 8 . 7/31/2013
WHO STOOD IN FRONT OF HER?! DAMMIT TOOYA, I THOUGHT YOU WERE AWESOME! Well...you still are :3 but..um...i dont like it when you kill somebo- aaaaaaaand... im crying...ACK WHO DID HE HIT?!
| BoomPowMina chapter 7 . 7/31/2013
Tooya I love you :3
SHE OPENED THE SCROLL :0
| BoomPowMina chapter 6 . 7/31/2013
NOOOOOO DEIDARA! YOU CANT DIE AGAIN! YOU DIED IN THE ORIGINAL SERIES ALREADY, PLEASE DONT DIE AGAIN! PLEASE DONT DO THIS TO ME, MY BODY WILL DEHYDRATE, MY TEARS ARE FLOWING LIKE RIVERS! WAAAAAAAAAAAAH NO DEIDARA, DONT DIE!
NARUTO! SAKURA IS NOT DEAD, SHE IS STILL HERE, YEAH!SHE IS HERE! ON THE SAME PLANET AS YOU!
Now, it is time for my obsession with the only OC i ever didnt hate :3
TOOYAAAAAAAAAAA YOU ARE HEREEEEEEEEE YAAAAAAAAAY I LOVE YOU!