|Reviews for Evolution|
| Cassandra Echizen chapter 5 . 4/29/2016
I cant read properly... My tears is blocking my view .
Naruto... I can imagine him and ut hit me likes a lightning... The pain he will bear. Noooo
| stainedxcherryblossom chapter 4 . 10/20/2015
The last part killed me...
| stainedxcherryblossom chapter 3 . 10/19/2015
I'm dying with sadness and grief...this is the most depressing part of the story...I can even picture Sasuke and Sakura in my mind and their parting moments... :'(
| stainedxcherryblossom chapter 2 . 10/19/2015
| jhian casey chapter 10 . 6/14/2015
damn good! awesome job, mitsuki!;)
i just hope you went a little more detailed of the lemon part here.. some fics are so, so thorough in writing the lemon scenes and haven't removed their work yet..hehehe..
just a thought, though..;)
looking forward to salvation baby! thanks!;)
| ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 10 . 3/20/2015
He's aliiiiiiiiiiive! :D Great so far, can't wait to read the last installment.
| Amy chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
I'm loving this trilogy so far (haven't started Salvation yet, though)! You are an amazing writer, one of the most original in a long time. I cried when you killed Deidera! I love DeiSaku as much as ItaSaku, and it would be interesting to read a story involving ItaSakuDei where Deidera wins her over, which is so rare. :( I also wanted to read the lemon *blushes* but I don't have a LiveJournal, although I am over 18 so it's legal haha.
| Inanari chapter 10 . 3/27/2014
Oh my, is that deidara I hear? Bad itachi for lying to Sakura.
| Bleuboo2013 chapter 9 . 11/21/2013
I bawled my eyes out reading this chapter T-T
| Bleuboo2013 chapter 2 . 11/21/2013
I read them! :D I find authors notes informative and entertaining lol Love the story so far btw! As much as I like Sasuke, I have a anime-love for Ita-sama and would prefer Sasuke-kun not to get in the way of their love :) But that's just me
| Syren chapter 10 . 9/26/2013
MitsukiShiroi - san
Your story has been nothing but captivating... I will most likely be re-reading again, as well as reading Salvation and all your other fics :) I have to say though, you are the first writer I have encountered, to cordon off your sexual content on this site... While I can understand your qualms and commend you for the action you take, lol, I feel so disappointed that I can't read some good Itachi on Sakura goodness! Hahahaha [blushes] Sadly, I am not a part of LiveJournal. Anyway, I can deal :D Your fics are awesome! Keep up the good work :)
| BoomPowMina chapter 10 . 7/31/2013
W-what? Dei...dara? Please...please, please, please be alive, and not some stupid jutsu..PLEASE DEIDARA! D':
Calm down, breathe Mina, BREATHE DAMMIT! Oh look...im crying again...You probably noticed that i am EXTREMELY emotional, but this many times is not normal man...
THEY WILL MEET AGAIN DAMMIT! . It is time to go to sleep...see yah tomorrow, when i continue to SALVATION! :'D G' Night
| BoomPowMina chapter 9 . 7/31/2013
Did that really just happen? YOU KILLED HIM YOU BASTARD! I AM CRYING MY EYES OUT NOW! YOU KILLED DEIDARA! NONONONONONONONONONONO! HE CANT DIE AGAIN! NOOOO! I HATE YOU TOOYA! DEIDARA NOOOOO! DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD': WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH DEIDARAAAAAAA YOU ARE GONE AGAINNNNNNNN! Ahem. I am gonna go weep in my closet now...
Dammit Tooya, i was fangirling over you, and you kill my favorite character...you bastard...but you still are the awesomest OC out there...BUT I HATE YOU FOR KILLING DEIDARAAAAAAA WAAAAAAAAAHHHH HOW COULD YOU JUST GET KILLED DEIDARA!? God dammit, i am gonna go wash my mouth, it was fangirling... unacceptable! Stupid mouth...
Rest in Peace Deidara, I love you :']
| BoomPowMina chapter 8 . 7/31/2013
WHO STOOD IN FRONT OF HER?! DAMMIT TOOYA, I THOUGHT YOU WERE AWESOME! Well...you still are :3 but..um...i dont like it when you kill somebo- aaaaaaaand... im crying...ACK WHO DID HE HIT?!
| BoomPowMina chapter 7 . 7/31/2013
Tooya I love you :3
SHE OPENED THE SCROLL :0