Reviews for Evolution
young kagome chapter 10 . 5/11
Aww he survived? Why didn’t he tell Sakura! She doesn’t deserve him, she doesn’t even acknowledge his love. And why is she so ok with letting Naruto think she’s dead? Ugh I can’t wait to read the last story. Good job!
StillBlooming37 chapter 2 . 12/10/2017
I love your story I really do but Sakura makes me want to fight her I literally want to reach in the and slap her and tell her to get the fuck over him! He’s been an asshole to you so many fucking times why go after somebody like that and she talking about nothing else matters I’m like oh my god man shut the fuck up Sakura there are plenty of other guys out there better then him I mean I guess it would be okay if she thought of him as friend but she actually really believes in this fanfiction that they’ll be together even though I know they’re already married but anyway I still love your story
Cherry blossom chapter 10 . 3/18/2017
I love you so much the way you talk drives me crazy and I will read Salvation. I am a big Itasaku fan I love them so much the time Is 01:26 and I can't sleep curtacy of you
annellaleverein chapter 10 . 1/26/2017
Deidara is alive?!
Cassandra Echizen chapter 5 . 4/29/2016
I cant read properly... My tears is blocking my view .
Naruto... I can imagine him and ut hit me likes a lightning... The pain he will bear. Noooo
stainedxcherryblossom chapter 4 . 10/20/2015
The last part killed me...
stainedxcherryblossom chapter 3 . 10/19/2015
I'm dying with sadness and grief...this is the most depressing part of the story...I can even picture Sasuke and Sakura in my mind and their parting moments... :'(
stainedxcherryblossom chapter 2 . 10/19/2015
jhian casey chapter 10 . 6/14/2015
damn good! awesome job, mitsuki!;)
i just hope you went a little more detailed of the lemon part here.. some fics are so, so thorough in writing the lemon scenes and haven't removed their work yet..hehehe..
just a thought, though..;)
looking forward to salvation baby! thanks!;)
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 10 . 3/20/2015
He's aliiiiiiiiiiive! :D Great so far, can't wait to read the last installment.
Amy chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
I'm loving this trilogy so far (haven't started Salvation yet, though)! You are an amazing writer, one of the most original in a long time. I cried when you killed Deidera! I love DeiSaku as much as ItaSaku, and it would be interesting to read a story involving ItaSakuDei where Deidera wins her over, which is so rare. :( I also wanted to read the lemon *blushes* but I don't have a LiveJournal, although I am over 18 so it's legal haha.
Inanari chapter 10 . 3/27/2014
Oh my, is that deidara I hear? Bad itachi for lying to Sakura.
Bleuboo2013 chapter 9 . 11/21/2013
I bawled my eyes out reading this chapter T-T
Bleuboo2013 chapter 2 . 11/21/2013
I read them! :D I find authors notes informative and entertaining lol Love the story so far btw! As much as I like Sasuke, I have a anime-love for Ita-sama and would prefer Sasuke-kun not to get in the way of their love :) But that's just me
Syren chapter 10 . 9/26/2013
MitsukiShiroi - san

Your story has been nothing but captivating... I will most likely be re-reading again, as well as reading Salvation and all your other fics :) I have to say though, you are the first writer I have encountered, to cordon off your sexual content on this site... While I can understand your qualms and commend you for the action you take, lol, I feel so disappointed that I can't read some good Itachi on Sakura goodness! Hahahaha [blushes] Sadly, I am not a part of LiveJournal. Anyway, I can deal :D Your fics are awesome! Keep up the good work :)

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