Reviews for Ashes to Ashes
Apolla360 chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Aplauds.

That...was amazing, so realistic; I'm just amazed beyond words.

Update soon.

P.s I teared up.
Harlin chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
This is such a great story! Almost had me in tears! Sob sob! Anywho can't wait for the next chapter!
SilverstarsEbonyskies chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
That was awesome. You MUST post another chapter soon.
Galateagirl chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Wow...this is an incredible story. Tears are coming to my eyes. Please, Please write more of this and other stories.
Lacey52 chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
O, I like it. But you already knew that, lol.

Actually you fixed all the little things I noticed when I read over it, so kudos to you! It didn't need much changing at all, and I really enjoy how you've set it up.

You're keeping your audience in suspense and guessing, thats for sure. I can't wait to see where the next chapter leads us.

Only suggestion I have for you is to take some of your longer paragraphs and break them up into two paragraphs for easier reading. My eyes tend to strain when I'm trying to follow a sentence in a huge paragraph.

Other than that you've done a fantastic job with both the written aspect of the fic and the characters. Lots of love to you Osco, and congrats on an interesting story!

~Lacey~
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