Reviews for Black Sheep Outcast
writergrl411 chapter 7 . 3/27/2006
! what happened to mark and the others? update!
Josh chapter 7 . 3/21/2006
Wonderful story line. You only forgot one thing, FF helmets are strapped onto a person's head, so it is difficult for it to come off. However, there are more than one FF in the dept. that forgets to tighten their strap. Keep up the work, you are doing well.
Mrs.Allen-Queen chapter 6 . 3/19/2006
Update soon!
Mouse In The Corner chapter 6 . 3/18/2006
Wow, nice cliffie. Good so far and update soon when you get the chance.
stars and stripes forever chapter 5 . 3/16/2006
come on whats the holdup post chapter six
stars and stripes forever 653 chapter 5 . 2/28/2006
for chapter six make it in kims pov
LittleMissTake chapter 5 . 2/19/2006
YAY, chapter 5 is up! Great chapter, is Brendan Mark's twin? Did Kate have them both in an affair and each parent took one? Great how you put in that Mark isn't actually that bad off and that he's realising that now, just hope he lives to remember it! Not entirely sure anyone would live after plunging out of the sky, but after seeing 'Lost', heck, anything is possible! Good work, update soon!
sheriffandsteel chapter 5 . 2/19/2006
Mrs.Allen-Queen chapter 5 . 2/19/2006
Is Mark going to be okay? Update soon!
Mouse In The Corner chapter 5 . 2/18/2006
Nice cliffhanger. Thanks for finnaly undating... Don't let him die, he's my favorite char :)
stars and stripes forever 653 chapter 4 . 2/17/2006
please post chapter 5 asap
charlie chapter 4 . 2/11/2006
wow, its real good, but i don't like cliffhangers so please update soon!
stars and stripes forever 653 chapter 4 . 2/10/2006
please post chapter five soon
Mouse In The Corner chapter 4 . 2/10/2006
Such good grammer and spelling. Also, god, god, plot... but I hate cliffhangers. (Love your disclaimer!)
Mrs.Allen-Queen chapter 4 . 2/9/2006
What did Mark say, "What in the world!..." Will we find out soon? Update soon!
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