Reviews for In Need of a Date
beautiful-gorgeous06 chapter 11 . 4/27/2007
I like the story. It's a cool story although the plot resembles that one of "The Wedding Date" starring Debra Messing and Dermot Mulroney. (No offence) I liked the ending tho! Very sweet.
HarlequinHangman chapter 11 . 3/2/2007
Ek! That was cute! x3
Shabell chapter 13 . 1/25/2007
cute !
Alenor chapter 11 . 12/10/2006
heya, i absolutely loved this story. cya later Alenor.
PetuniaPatronus chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Ohh I adore the Lots of fake Love part. Very cute beginning.
xx.Live.Your.Dreams.xx chapter 12 . 10/4/2006
LOVE IT! can't wait to read the sequal!
Sahariah chapter 11 . 9/9/2006
Well, the plot of the story was certainly there. Your general idea for the story was very good, and quite creative! The story's downfall however was it's lack of development... While it was still fine, you could have done a lot more with it- especially to make it less rushed. You said yourself in quite a few chapters that you weren't sure how what to write, or how to end the chapters. You don't have to rush it! :) Just work on character development more, so its easier for your reader to visualize what is happening. Draco and Hermione realistically wouldn't fall in love over the course of 2-3 days. I know it's fanfiction, but realism can really have a great deal of impact- and that's what a reader is looking for!

All in all, the story was good. Your creativity really showed through what you wrote- it's just all the detail-y stuff you need to work on. Good job. :)

Sahariah
Jennifer-Marie chapter 11 . 8/26/2006
ha ha, ron would make a good hobo!

xjennx
Jennifer-Marie chapter 10 . 8/26/2006
ron's a nut.

but i like the story

xjenmn
Jennifer-Marie chapter 9 . 8/26/2006
stupid fred.

xjennx
Jennifer-Marie chapter 8 . 8/26/2006
this is why i NEVER liked ron

xjennx
Jennifer-Marie chapter 7 . 8/26/2006
sizzle burn. i never got to inish chapter six...it stopped in the middle i never read about thr broom flying or anything.

xjennx
Jennifer-Marie chapter 4 . 8/26/2006
ha ha. i like it so far

xjennx
Jennifer-Marie chapter 3 . 8/26/2006
aw
Jennifer-Marie chapter 2 . 8/26/2006
blahh ron youre alittle late on that confession right there.

xjennx
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