Reviews for The Desert Rose
Cah chapter 40 . 5/14/2016
this is the best gasaku story i have ever read, thanks to little falcon for creating this awesome story .. i also used to like sasusaku but now i just want gaasaku T_T i also have read the sequel of this story and you know what ? i have never been bored of reading 'the desert rose' and the sequel, over and over again .. i just love your writing .. huwaaaaa, please write more gaasaku stories !
rivaille.moon chapter 1 . 3/26/2016
This piece of art is simply astonishing. I've read it more than 5 times.
DarkJewel55 chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
when you said 'Kazekage' i assumed Gaara, but then who would be the person she is supposed to rendezvous with? Temari? Kankuro? nope, guess who? Gaara! so who the crud is the Kazekage? i then checked to see when this story was written... 2006. in that case i don't blame you, but i don't think I'll read this, i like the shippuden timeline far too much. doesn't mean i don't like it though! it's awesome! i like the idea and all! but I'm still too attached to shippuden... I'll give it a year or two, then, if this story is still here, I'll read it! 'kay? lolz.
cheers, -AHxxx
Jelly Ace chapter 8 . 7/2/2015
Li chapter 40 . 5/16/2015
(Sorry my keyboard was acting up so I didn't finish my review) So there were some factors that would keep my review completely positive. On the technical side other than your usual grammatical errors which happen to everybody, I found that the story seemed a little hectic in its consistency. In short the change between the POVs was unclear at the majority of the time until you read about a sentence in to dispel the confusion. I also felt that there was a little lacking in personal motivation and character thought details that would add more depth to the story. Almost like I could taste a sample of the cake but not the whole thing. For my personal complaints I would have to say that I didn't like how Sakura was so frequently hurt and rescued by all of the other characters, as I might have to see her use her own strength and intelligence evade capture. besides all these I would have to say hat I thoroughly enjoyed your s tory and I would be pleased to see that you keep writing
Li chapter 40 . 5/16/2015
It is my rule to never review a story until I have read it through to the end, and this I did. First off, The Desert Rose has an astounding amount of plot creativity which I find is rare in fanfiction. Most stories rarely deviate from the main storyline so heavily, and the complex new plot direction is a welcome treat. Aside from these elements that I liked such as the fluff scenes, there were some technical and personal preference factors that would keep my
LycanFerret chapter 11 . 1/11/2015
I have one thing to say, well this being my first time reviewing, this might seem a little odd, but a Dissection done on living organism's is called a Vivisection. But, aside from a few typo's, which I understand is inevitable, I must say, your fan-fiction is quite amazing. I have so far only found two that, dare I say, really spike my interest, that being said, I take my leave.
Guest chapter 40 . 6/22/2014
Not quite the longest GarraxSakura Fiction at about 98k words. Most chapters, perhaps. But definitely not the longest.
Didd23 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
challenge accepted
Natasha chapter 38 . 1/24/2014
Seqal so a seqal please cause this is such a good story.
Latifa chapter 40 . 11/17/2013
17 hours pretending to be sick,wow this is one heck of romantic story.I can't believe my parents brought a nurse to look after me for my so-called "sickness"which isn't real at all and that is ruining my plans of reading your fanfics,but dnt wory I'll make a new plan by acting nomal again.P.S I did dare to read the longest chapers you've written and guess what? I kinda admire you
brianna chapter 25 . 10/19/2013
this story made me cry and laugh and oh I love it. make another sakuxgaara soon
sarahluvskats98 chapter 40 . 7/22/2013
I loved it... I started crying when I thought Sakura died.
sarahluvskats98 chapter 11 . 7/22/2013
I don't like Gaara-kuns "fiance", she sounds like a bitch lol. I love Gaara's reaction to Sakura though.
Okinawa Girl chapter 33 . 3/3/2013
This is probably my favorite chapter! So funny LOL! I knew Gaara and Shikamaru were gonna be pissed! I thought they were gonna kill Sasuke and Naruto!
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