Reviews for Just a Second
Ess Tii Eph Yu chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Short, but compelling. Technically proficient, and spiritually inspiring. Very good work.
malanthropy chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
This was awesome! It does seem like a bit of a plothole that the Seconds would have anxious looks on their faces as they watched the battle, ne? Oh well. I luvz it quite a bit. Especially the very last line.
ecstatica chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
Really well thought out, I enjoyed reading this -
FreyOfDavis chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
Good story. I just saw Armitage I for the first time last night, and I wondered about the Second's thoughts during the battle too. Thanks for writing this.
StarStealer chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
Wonderful story and a very unique idea. I loved the point you brought up. Robots were so hated and yet they trust them (Mariso) with the future of their generation. Excellent observation and a great story. Keep writing!
Chendzeea Li chapter 1 . 2/17/2002
Hi ah love your story. A shame there isn't a armitage area yet (
S.H chapter 1 . 7/21/2001
I thought that the way the 2nd by, telling someone the truth from her own perspective, might have made the difference in her own way and in a signicant way too. Good job