|Reviews for A different way of Life|
| Jessieeds chapter 5 . 8/11
Had to stop reading after chapter 4, the way it is written just isn't interesting and rather simple. It lacks a personal feature and personalities to each character, the characters seem to just do the same things together. But good idea, but needs more attention to writing and grammar.
| teachergirl chapter 7 . 2/7
I give up. Lily is not in fact a muggle. She's a muggle born witch. How can you not know the difference. A muggle has no magic! I can't a read a story when the author has no knowledge basic things like that!
| teachergirl chapter 6 . 2/7
Why would a witch ask anyone for the time. She has a wand with which to cast a time spell. And, why do you have Peter graduating in August when school is over in June?
| fons19 chapter 65 . 2/5
lavender of all people what is he thinking
| RadioactiveRaven101 chapter 4 . 10/15/2015
I'm enjoying the story so far, but doesn't James have a Potter mansion or something as he's rich.
Or are you going with that Harry was rich because everyone wanted to give him galleons because he defeated Voldemort?
Anyway, cool story!
| TheRandomGirlWhoLovesPancakes chapter 65 . 7/8/2015
Awww poor Gin, she must be sad when she finds out...
| TheRandomGirlWhoLovesPancakes chapter 52 . 7/8/2015
Haha lol poor harry, he must have been mortified...
| Divine Protector of Skyrim chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
Most of your errors is just grammer ones, and it looks a lot nicer and is easier to read if you bolded the title of the chapter and capitalized the main words in the title,
Instead of: a shot in the dark
More like: A Shot in the Dark
And yes I know it's been like two years since you've completer this story, but I can't help but still offer advice.
| Divine Protector of Skyrim chapter 2 . 3/31/2015
Ok, it is spelled 'events' not 'evidents'q, also rememberto add a space after a period. The prologues format probably should be change, you keep the same format through the whole story.
| little lily witch chapter 7 . 7/30/2014
It seems like a very good idea but it also seems written very poorly. I can get over bad grammar and spelling, what I can't ignore so easily is your lack of knowledge of the magical world. That is just too much.
| Lala land chapter 76 . 10/29/2013
Aren't broomsticks supposed to be much more expensive?
| Trizzle chapter 4 . 8/28/2013
| Marlo27 chapter 2 . 8/11/2013
This story seemed interesting and exciting at first; then I realised how many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors this contained and I could read it no longer. You need a beta.
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/9/2013
your language is very formal
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/5/2013
I'm going to have to stop reading at chapter 7. The story has been ok up to this point, but the begining of chapter 7 has "jumped the shark" as the saying goes. The ministry of magic has aurors, not the order of the pheonix. Also, Remus as a werewolf would face too much prejudice to be allowed into Auror training. Auror training isn't easy, so it seems more than far fetched that all 4 went through Auror training and decide not to be aurors. Why would anyone go through that training so they could work in the bookstore. I understand the concept of fanfiction is to take the authors world and put your own spin to it. However, this story borders on nonsensical.