I think that the comma before the word unconscious ought to be removed. Furthermore, I think it would work better if you were to put the "She then fell unconscious" part into a new paragraph, and put it as "She then fell into a dead faint. Calvin[…]"

It also seems out of character for Calvin to smile contentedly, rather than to rush to Susie's aid.

Beyond errors along that line, this is a good start, and I will continue reading.

MAKE THE SEQUEL! PLEASE!

Fantastic. One of the greats.

you would have thought that calvins wand would have been made from tiger fur or somethign else connected to hobbes

ok so calvin isnt harry potter, that might be an interesting story all to its own though

it should be interesting to see how a character like calvin who defines the essence of childhood grows up

DUMBO! Don't drink the alcohol! You'll get Disney Acid Sequence!

Really great story! Loved the aliens!

Excellently done! Hats off to you! The entire fanfic was incredibly awesome, except for a bit of spelling and grammatical errors here and there.

(Sniff.) Beautiful. You did well with the drama too, not just humor.

I LOVE that eagles and snakes bit!

This story is awesome and it combined my two fav stories of all time! I could see every scene in my brain as Calvin is in the books. Especially the crystal ball scene :) You did a really great job staying true to Calvin's character. Look forward to reading more!

Classic!

Love Calvin's rivalry with Percy!

What can I say? Excellent.