|Reviews for After the War|
| ConstablePenhale'sExWife chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
| Dreamflower chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
This is a lovely little series of vignettes covering the post-Quest lives of the three remaining Travellers.
If you don't mind a tiny little nit: You might want to change "okay" to "all right". "Okay" is too modern sounding. Otherwise, excellent work.
| Culumacilinte chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
Oh, that was lovely. Perfectly in character, and all. Clearly you know Lord of the Rings well, which seems to be something, when it comes to fanfiction. I did love the passages from the book, marking the milestones, as it were, in their collective lives, very well executed.
“What do you mean?” the Took asked, his voice reminding Merry of far off times when the two had roamed the fields and Pippin had asked him questions on everything and anything.
I loved that, it made me a bit teary.
Overall, a fabulous job- Brava.
| carandae chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
I loved this story, I truly did, but I felt that it went a bit too fast and skipped through things a bit.
But it was nice to see how you took parts of the time line to apply them to your story. Nice.