Reviews for Battleground
Ookii Mamoru chapter 17 . 5/26/2008
Just picked up this, very interesting.

What happens next.

TuTuFan101 chapter 16 . 6/4/2007
This story is so addictive to read and its left at such a cliffhager for me, so please update soon! and keep up the good work!
Sir Exal chapter 16 . 12/27/2006
Excellent. You've managed to make the fic action-packed without ever sacrificing the tenderness and internal problems that made me love Please Teacher! so much.

Look back at your earlier chapters, and you'll find at times that it's near impossible to tell who's saying what. Try to fix that.
Drifter950 chapter 15 . 10/8/2006
Darn good story, please continue. I really want to see where you go with it.
Nightgazer333 chapter 15 . 9/24/2006
Ikarias chapter 15 . 8/23/2006
Thank god. i was afraid the story stalled completaly. I love the chapter though. Three seconds. cool. Keep it comming, dont leave us hanging.
szaugglaughs chapter 15 . 8/23/2006
yeah! Nice exciting chapter. I thought the action was very clear and easy to follow. Looking forward to the next one.
Lyra the Heretic chapter 14 . 8/12/2006
This is a good story, though your fight scenes kinda drag on...

I look forward to more.
Himnyuk chapter 14 . 8/11/2006
FAST! Make another chapter!
Phil2121 chapter 14 . 7/16/2006
I liek it the the Story ist picking up speed. Damn i'm getting agai this curiousity feeling "What is going to happen next?" shame on you for making me addicted to this story ;)

Keep up the good work and "What is going to happen next?"
Ikarias chapter 14 . 6/4/2006
m. comming to a climax, arnt we? :-D

the combat scene was a bit long, but thats a personal opinion. keep it up.
anime-otaku420 chapter 14 . 6/3/2006
wow...never expected Sirus being a human. very nice twist... keep it coming
Mike chapter 13 . 6/1/2006
Great story and kep going. It's such a shame that so many of these Onegai fanfics die out and don't continue. Moshi is my hero.
anime-otaku420 chapter 13 . 5/25/2006
WHOA! nice suppencefull chap. ending. tottaly sucks that melani got the disc back. maybe u can get Kei go help Moshi or you could make him beat Melani up for hurting Mizuho, that would be seriously funny.
atlantis-rob chapter 13 . 5/25/2006
Woot! Great chapter, excellent job on the running battle between Moshi and the brat and bot. Too bad she found the disc though it had to happen. Excellent work with moshi's continueing battle with the bot/borg. Cheers!
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