Reviews for A Secret Uncovered |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm reading this on ao3 and I just was too curious to see how different the 2 versions were so I had to find it on here... Not to mention your fic deserves a like, follow and review on here as well |
![]() ![]() ![]() Trying to catch up on years of fan fic. I had to go reread from the beginning since I didn't remember it well enough and the story flows much better when read all at once. I think your writing improved as the story progressed. I had guessed that the one thing that would insure Jazz's survival would be if he never went into the portal in the first place so Dan could not have been created, but as you explained in your author's note you wanted to show Danny dealing with the reality of it. I'm glad things worked out okay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its not often a story makes me cry but good damn it that hut a little too hard good job i could feel the emotion |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit, it updated. I discovered this fic back when it wasn't updated since 2016, and I enjoyed it, thank you for finishing this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats on finishing this! Totally enjoyed every bit of this fic! Looking forward to more DP fanfics from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A fantastic, spectacular ending! Thank you so much for writing this! I absolutely loved it and it was definitely worth the wait! Hopefully Tortured Revenge updates will come up nexf? Anyway, again, fantastic way to end the story! By the way, was Alice okay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY- WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE THE SHOCK I HAD SITTING IN COLLEGE AND FINDING OUT THAT THIS UPDATED! I FIRST READ THIS FIC WHEN I WAS 12 AND STILL BARELY IN MIDDLE SCHOOL AND HAD ACCEPTED THAT I LIKELY WOULDN'T BE SEEING THE WAY IT ENDS ANY TIME SOON BUT I'M SO HAPPY TO BE PROVED WRONG! [SPOILER WARNING FOR ANYONE READING MY REVIEW STOP HERE IF YOU HAVEN'T READ CHAPTER 25 YET] THIS- THIS IS SUCH A PERFECT ENDING FOR AN ALREADY PERFECT FIC! THIS STORY HAD EVERYTHING I EVER WANTED IN A REVEAL FIC LIKE IT LITERALLY SET THE STANDARD FOR ME READING REVEAL FICS LATER ON AND MY GOD THE ENDING DID NOT DISAPPOINT! I LOVE HOW YOU DIDN'T KEEP JAZZ DEAD (that broke my heart so bad when I read this the first time you have no idea) AND DIDN'T GET OUR HOPES UP JUST TO DASH THEM! I REALLY APPRECIATE YOU FOR THAT! ANOTHER THING IS THAT I LOVED IS HOW THE PRICE DANNY HAD TO PAY TO FIX EVERYTHING WAS THE BURDEN OF KNOWING HIS SISTER DIED THE FIRST TIME AROUND AND HOW HE'D HAVE TO LIVE WITH THAT FOR THE REST OF HIS LIFE WITH NO SUPPORT! DEFINITELY BETTER THAN THE ALTERNATIVE (someone else dying instead of Jazz, not being able to save Jazz in the first place, etc...). ALL IN ALL WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE MY HAPPINESS TO SEE THIS UPDATED (I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG AHHHHHH) AND I DEFINITELY CANNOT WAIT FOR THE EPILOGUE! THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH FOR COMING BACK! IT WAS A VERY WELCOME SURPRISE |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's great to see you back writing again. I definitely would like an epilogue. regardless, this still stands as one of my all time favorite fanfiction stories from any author for any source material. thank you for the great story. hope to see more from you. if not, I understand. wish you nothing but the best |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was on the verge of crying! What an amazing chapter and so worth the wait! I can’t wait for the epilogue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! I can't believe it! I remember reading and reviewing this story all the way back in 2006! I had to check my Review History and they're still there! it was literally sixteen years ago. I was a teenager with an AOL account and a big fan of Danny Phantom. I'm now 33 and a completely different person; it's crazy to see something from so long ago come back It's been like a lifetime, but It's wonderful to see you return! this isn't really a review because I want to actually sit and re-read the entire story to remember everything that happened, but welcome back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() All I have to say is Ho-ly shit. I'm not just saying it when I say that when it comes to books, movies, video games or TV shows, they don't make me cry. There are only a handful of exceptions and this story is one of them. This has to be one of the most well written character deaths and fanfics in general that I have EVER read. Kudos x10000. Super excited to see how this fic gets wrapped up in Chapter 25! |
![]() ![]() Ok. Okokok. I’m totally not bawling my eyes out right now. Totally. Pfffft what gave you that idea. Srsly tho. I haven’t cried reading/watching smth in a while so, that in itself shows just how good a writer you are. Anyway. Can’t wait for the next/last chapter! I literally binged this series and it’s all absolutely amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good! I love how it started out as a relatively wholesome post reveal story with Danny dealing with the public's differing opinions of him. There was the mystery; someone did plan to have Danny revealed. But I really wasn't expecting it to become so dire though! It was Dan?! He's absolutely sadistic here! The fight was so brutal. At least Danny managed to destroy him but the cost! I can't believe you killed Jazz! That was heart wrenching to read! I actually ended up reading this because I saw you're participating in the half dead fic project so I really hope that last chapter gets posted some day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is very wholesome |