calm before the storm. i can feel it. on another note, Lancer is the GOAT, and will continue to be so. :D

Please when are you going be back we miss you please tell me your haven't give up of this, I know your think of something for the next Chapter just one more Chapter and your compete your story, please be a happy ending like jazz going back to life because Clockwork please update soon

I have never felt so devastated for Danny in all my fan-fiction reading experience. You made me shed more tears than I care to admit. It was so emotional and intense. He didn't know who would live or die and that is especially tough on a kid.

I'm excited to see what happens in the last chapter if you do decide to finish this story. All this time I've been wondering the same things: Where is Clockwork? Did something happen to him? Why is he not helping?

And now I wonder: Will Clockwork actually turn back time for Danny?

This was such a rollercoaster of a story. If Danny wanted to turn back time, I'd imagine he would want to reverse it before his secret was revealed. No one would remember their hero's identity. He would never have to face the press, his teachers and classmates, or his family's reactions. He could go back to life before when he wasn't doubting himself and always worrying about how others thought of him.

Great story so far. I hope you get around to finishing it.

UGH! I WANNA KILL THE CAMERAMAN THAT DID THIS! NOW, DANNY WON'T HAVE THE PRIVACY, HE'LL SUFFER UNDER PRESSURE, AND HE AND HIS FRIENDS AND FAMILY WILL BE TARGETED 24/7!

plzzzzz update

new ship: Danny x Lettuce Wrap

"I thought everyone did." Jazz is me right now. I'm always so surprised when people don't know mythology.

I WAS RIGHT! Haha! The second it said Danny recognized the voice I went: it's Dan isn't it!? It's Dan Phantom!
Seriously, aside from that, I love this story! You did a really good job putting everything together and not to mention the plot is really interesting. At first I thought it would be like any other revelation fic...but you definitely made this one different. In a great way too! Keep it up!

*le gasp* I KNEW IT WAS DAN! The clever little...SNEAKY PUPPETMASTER!

"... and lettuce wrap this chapter up."

Lies!

You have an obsession lettuce wraps!

This was an interesting chapter you wrote all about Jazz's and Danny forgiving himself but no matter the painful sting is there. At the Danny arid "I'll fix this" And flow to the sky.

I can't even express how much I love this story.
This last chapter actually made me cry. I don't usually cry over things I read, but I could feel the pain in every word as I soaked up all the information. It was terrifying how I felt like my own sister had been killed reading from Danny's perspective.

I don't know when the final chapter will be out, but I can guarantee that it will have at least one reader.

This brought a single tear from my eyes...I haven't cried in a long time, a sing tear fell but my eyes are moist...a beautiful story indeed