|Reviews for A Secret Uncovered|
| Beaniepie1 chapter 24 . 8/9/2013
First off, I was just to lazy to log in, but I did give you my username. Second: How could you?! How could you kill Jazz?! You're a monster! I know that you're having Clockwork come in the next chapter to (hopefully) fix it, but still! I cried for half an hour! Granted, I was reading this at 3 AM, but that doesn't make it hurt any less! Remember earlier in the story, when Sam was listing all those vile things she wanted to do to Mr Dickens? That's what I want to do to you for writing this! Well, not really, because making me cry is a sign of good writing. But that doesn't mean I can't do it in my head! My family is staring at me like I have two heads, because I'm crying will typing this, so I'm going to stop now...
| DragonDude23 chapter 24 . 8/6/2013
Oh my god. This story is so good and so sad QnQ. I was literally crying when I knew Jazz died last chapter. It was so heart wreaking. I just hope when the next chapter comes, Danny will think of a way to fix all of this (maybe clockwork can fix this?).
| Rainosa chapter 24 . 8/1/2013
OH MY GOODNESS! I just- I-I-I mean, whoah! The emotions were just like, through the roof, a-and it was was just all like... WOW! I'm not going to lie, I bawled my eyes out on this last chapter. You're good! Like, really good! Go write a book series! What you really handled well was transitioning it from the happier tone of the show to the slightly darker pulse of this story. And Valerie! Oh, I'm so happy you got Valerie's reaction to his identity in there. I was utterly unimpressed with the show when they didn't focus on her thoughts. I wrote my own fanfic on that to clear things up for my conscience. I'd love it if you read it, it's my only one so far, so it shouldn't be hard to track. But yeah. WOW! My goodness, I'm never going to be able to look at the show or think about Jazz without crying, am I? Oh, yeah, here it comes...
| Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 24 . 7/30/2013
Oh my God. This was...such a sad chapter. I actually started tearing up. And you updated it three months ago? I wanna see if Clockwork will agree to Danny's request and will Danny still tell his parents if Clockwork does change things?
On a better note, at least Dan's dead. YAY FOR THAT!
Please update soon. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| xxRebelWinterxx chapter 24 . 7/29/2013
nooo JAZZ! :'(
| shin obin chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
You mean celebrities dont do that stuff?
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/22/2013
I knew it! I knew it was his future self! This story is awesome so far by the way... I don't write fanfiction I just like to read it :D
| dragongirl2011 chapter 24 . 7/17/2013
It was great i cried it was so sad please update soon
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/15/2013
***Mr. FALLUCA ...well I was close enough!
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/13/2013
Very good. I'm only at chapter 15, and my only real complaint is that some parts are definitely draggy...Dash, Lancer, and Danny's schoolmates are all getting predictable. Also, Lancer is Danny's ENGLISH TEACHER primarily, not Bio. I only mention it because this is a CRUCIAL part of his character and his artsy nature. And I believe we did meet Danny's actual Math teacher in Flirting With Disaster (Mr. Beluga, I believe). I keep forgetting, though, that you were writing this as the series was still going, and I commend you for that! Other than that, SAM AND DANNY I NEED IT. Put a little something in there if you have not already in later chapters! I will keep reading.
| Kjones107716 chapter 24 . 7/10/2013
Noooooo! 25 isn't up yet! Gaah! Anyway, this is an amazing story! One of the best ones I've read, no joke. Its very well laid out, and while I didn't cry because I am a heartless person T.T, it showed wonderful emotion. This is the type of story I like.
| Zepharia chapter 24 . 7/7/2013
Thanks for making me cry my eyes out. Seriously though, love this story and can't wait for the final chapter! :)
| KitKatssie chapter 24 . 7/4/2013
Oh no don't mind me I'm just experiencing criPPLING EMOTIONAL PAIN
| njchrispatrick chapter 24 . 7/3/2013
Good good story. Is Jazz gonna get healed by a ghost or something? I hope she doesn't become a ghost, that would ruin it.
| Nyomi chapter 24 . 6/21/2013
Good lord, this is old and there's still a somewhat recent update?
Anyway, I've reread this story. A lot. 3 or 4 times and counting.
I love it, and you're a great writer. Honestly! :D And this freaking chapter made me depressed... if you're goal was to make me cry, you succeeded.
Jazz wasn't my favorite character, but a big part of me hates you for killing her off, if for nothing else than Danny's reaction.
Is he going to clockwork? Me thinkies he's going to clockwork.
And one of two things is going to happen- time is going to be reset and stuffz and then no one remembers this, or the fenton family lived happily ever after, (Now, I'm not sure if you'll bring Jazz back or not if you do that, but I have no complaints if you do. Or a mix of the two. .-.