Reviews for Betrayed
BAdFanFicTIONrighter99 chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
I love this, the ending was great.
012345679 chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Nice twist at the end I loved it
Xiaou Nem chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
It felt a little rushed, but cute.
It speaks to the fear we all (or maybe only *gasp* I) carry in our hearts: that we are really superfluous in our own lives. it doesn't matter how much we try to fit in, how many people claim to love us: the insecurity is still there.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Like it
Death and Rebirth chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
u were correct that was some ending!
Ash chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Oh my, I came really close to crying. That was not cool. Anyways nice ending.
StarryNight101 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
I thought it might be a dream. :) 'Cause that's just SO cruel, and I didn't think you were quite that evil.
s chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
i was getting worried till i read the ending. phew. nice ending
Ruka-Roxy83 chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Kinda felt like you were like what do I do for an ending oh wait it is a dream. Needs to be more creative. Had good potentail in the beginning.
mermaidharmony chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
the suprise was really a suprise!
Shadow The Ninja Kitten chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
For god's sake...change the rating to T or M! I hate authors who are too lazy to take 2 seconds of their time to change a rating to T or -I reported you for putting coarse language in a K-rated fic.
In-betweens chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
You got me all scared for Rini for nothing. She's fine and it was all a dream. Good. Great story!
Double G chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Wow, that was really good! I loved it!
Megan Consoer chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Bronze Wolf chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
This one is alright. It is a really good idea, but in the writing it seems rushed. I think you could have added alot more to it description wise and stuff to make it better.
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