Reviews for Grudge of the Asakura
crissylover chapter 13 . 8/20/2015
So you got this concept from "The Grudge"...good fic. But let me wish there should be an alternate ending where Yoh survives...
crissylover chapter 3 . 8/7/2015
I'm confused...who killed the burglar in the dark room? And who was that figure?
Guest chapter 13 . 8/6/2015
Omg, as much as I love the story and the ending...I'm gonna have nightmares
Guest chapter 13 . 7/24/2015
The previous chapters before this were almost creepy as hell. I guess this story has been derived from Insidious.

It's true though. Certain people were haunted by ghosts and were most likely killed. That was in Insidious, a horror movie. Although I don't know a lot about it, it was great. I somehow didn't manage to watch it again because the sound effects frighten me to death. I'd rather prefer to Insidious 2.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/24/2015
What an awful ending...At least Yoh could have been saved...
Guest chapter 8 . 7/24/2015
You're kinda using swear words in the previous chapters. Like...Hao said "I don't give a **** about those!" or something like that. You're really good in language, it suited Hao. I always expected it.

Good story, even though it goes with a shocking truth that Yoh's spirit was unstable and wanted revenge.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/24/2015
Wasn't Yoh strangled to death or hung on a noose? After all, there were black and blue rings on his neck so it's clear that he was strangled.

Hao somehow felt disgusted when Yoh was taken in for autopsy. Poor him...-_- You better puke first before you escape.
Guest chapter 13 . 9/30/2014
THAT WAS AMAZING! This was so intresting and It was a really, really, really amazing mysterious story and the only this I have to say is don't stop writing! :)
Asuka1920 chapter 13 . 4/24/2014
Loved it!
Shadowzamy chapter 13 . 9/24/2012
*sniff sniff* Uowaaah poor Yoh. So sad that he died. Waaah *starts crying uncontrollably* This is an epic story. *sniff sniff* The way that you played everything out is wonderful. *goes back to crying uncontrollably*
Maui Girl 808 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Heh hao making fun of yoh is awesome
and music chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
an epic story... 9/10!

you are so col!
tenkage onna chapter 13 . 4/17/2009
chilling. that is a deffinate! omg, i was so scared XDD this story was so sad, i felt bad for yoh ._. but it was a good story, and for your first, i hafta say...FRIGGEN AWESOME 83 loved it all, it was well thought out. loved how you connected how the kids hurt yoh to their death x_x was just amazing.

while i dont adore the ending, i do like it. it ended well, and not EVERYONE died 3 and yoh got to rest in peace to, so thats a plus. was a bit rushed, but i loved it either way!

once more, AWESOME STORY. 83
Shingetsutan A. Tsukihime chapter 10 . 12/1/2008
ugh!My first suspisons were correct!It was Manta's Father!So Yoh are you gonna kill me 2

YOh:No i can't blame you for anything...besides its natural for beings to ignore their gut feeling and follow concrete edvidence this is what Forensics does to your mind making it longer but more interesting to watch a case...

hmp at least you still have sense...

Yoh:Cuz i fear you


Yoh:you can control grudges spirits and the works and destiny and the moon y shuldnt u be feared!

cuz im merciful...

Yoh:*really quietly*Yeah like that mercy will be set on me...

i heard that!

YOh:prepares to y aren't you?

cuz im merciful...XD
Shingetsutan A. Tsukihime chapter 7 . 12/1/2008
Yoh is trying to tell everyone how he died huh? He's suffocating everyone that trie to get in his that he could get his revenge...
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