| Reviews for Moments of Clarity |
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  Guest chapter 13 . 5/10 i love this fic sm! 3 |
 Nathem chapter 12 . 4/8 Sam's right tho. he's meddling too much. he could've just suggest a therapist or put Sam and Pauline ina councillor like that cloud guy in world of gumball but instead they're forced against their own freewill. kinda rubs me the wrong thinking a teacher does that without a 2nd thought. anw the fic was neat but I can't with the ooc Ness specially Sam |
| Cyan Quartz chapter 13 . 11/12/2021 Heyo, loved the story so far mate! |
| KillgarraghForever chapter 7 . 6/20/2021 You... I like you. |
| KillgarraghForever chapter 2 . 6/20/2021 Me, looking at this in 2021: Poor unfortunate souls. |
| KillgarraghForever chapter 1 . 6/20/2021 DESERIEEEEE! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING?! |
| 0Shard0 chapter 13 . 1/25/2021 ...So this has been abandoned? It's a shame and big disappoint for me as I've been glued to this story and couldn't stop for long. I was looking forward to how you would've finished this. Also that you didn't bash characters which is a HUGE accomplishment and was hoping that you would've involved and explored more people and personalities. This has massive potential for big world building around Amity Park, the high school, existing characters, meta plots of the dozens, so many possibilities... I would've groaned and dreaded if this had around 50 or more chaps with the length or linger you post bit I've would be just as interested and sucked in to the story and would definitely be worth the read. The story is fantastic as it is but also has uncovered ground hunting that this could be so much bigger-and still succed-... So captivating.. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2018 I love your story it’s so hard to find original stories so it’s refreshing to find an original story plus it’s really well written |
| M.v.j.M chapter 13 . 7/24/2018 How is this complete!? And considering this story hasn’t been updated in over a decade I very much doubt it will ever be completed. |
| 0Shard0 chapter 6 . 8/28/2017 Such a twist! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/26/2017 Reading about in this gets me SO infuriated |
| Candle-lit Dreams chapter 13 . 6/20/2017 This was such a delightful readit made me really sad when I saw 'discontinued' in the summary. I do hope you find it in you to finish it someday. I really enjoyed Lancer's mind reading mishaps |
| Luminous Twilight chapter 3 . 5/31/2017 Fun fact about the quote at the beginning of the chapter it is actually misattributed to Churchill and the actual origin of the quote is unknown. |
| ElealehBlue chapter 13 . 3/30/2017 I'm going to guess that, since this hasn't been updated in eleven and a half years, that it's probably not going to be updated anytime soon. But, I still hope you'll pick it back up someday, and it's in my favorites list, so I'll know if it does. Good job on what's here, though : ) |
| hodges2 chapter 13 . 3/14/2017 nooooooooo! and this is so good too T.T *dies* |