that was quite the fic. i enyoyed every minute

i have a feeling Lancer is going to forget all of this anyway if team Phantom catches Desiree

lmao i love the movie "what girls want" this is going to be so fun

lol youd think the "w" word would be taboo at that point

i love this fic sm! 3

Sam's right tho. he's meddling too much. he could've just suggest a therapist or put Sam and Pauline ina councillor like that cloud guy in world of gumball but instead they're forced against their own freewill. kinda rubs me the wrong thinking a teacher does that without a 2nd thought. anw the fic was neat but I can't with the ooc Ness specially Sam

Heyo, loved the story so far mate!

You... I like you.

Me, looking at this in 2021: Poor unfortunate souls.

DESERIEEEEE! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING?!

...So this has been abandoned? It's a shame and big disappoint for me as I've been glued to this story and couldn't stop for long. I was looking forward to how you would've finished this.

Also that you didn't bash characters which is a HUGE accomplishment and was hoping that you would've involved and explored more people and personalities. This has massive potential for big world building around Amity Park, the high school, existing characters, meta plots of the dozens, so many possibilities...

I would've groaned and dreaded if this had around 50 or more chaps with the length or linger you post bit I've would be just as interested and sucked in to the story and would definitely be worth the read. The story is fantastic as it is but also has uncovered ground hunting that this could be so much bigger-and still succed-... So captivating..

I love your story it’s so hard to find original stories so it’s refreshing to find an original story plus it’s really well written

How is this complete!?

And considering this story hasn’t been updated in over a decade I very much doubt it will ever be completed.

Such a twist!

Reading about in this gets me
SO infuriated