Reviews for Moments of Clarity
Ruby 1334 chapter 13 . 1/29/2014
When are you next going to update this?
Please don't tell me you're actually discontinuing this!
I love this idea and story so much! It's very entertaining and interesting and I read this non-stop!
Plus, we're also getting to the last battle/ hard out ending bit! Please, please PLEASE finish this! I BEG YOU!
Ruby 1334 chapter 12 . 1/29/2014
Ahh yes! Somehow overshadowed AND locked in a closet! :D
And now Danny's gonna save the day!
WOOP WOOP to that!
Ruby 1334 chapter 11 . 1/29/2014
NO! What about Danny protecting Amity!?
I thought that it would've been cool for Lancer to know Danny's secret! (Which at first, it was.)
But now!
NO! He HAS to protect everyone! Otherwise they're all DOOMED!
You hear me? DOOMED!
Ruby 1334 chapter 10 . 1/29/2014
Good chapter! Interesting way to make Danny react. (I thought he was going to say something, say that it's not true. But I don't mind this either!) Can't wait to find out how this is solved!
Ruby 1334 chapter 9 . 1/29/2014
And the truth comes out! Good building up to it as well! :D
Amazing chapter!
Ruby 1334 chapter 8 . 1/29/2014
Woah, looks like ALOT of people have reviewed this story!
Anyways: Good chapter! Lancer's just getting more and more suspicious...
Ruby 1334 chapter 7 . 1/29/2014
So Danny now knows about Mr Lancer.
He is certainly going to be more careful about what he thinks now! :D
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Ruby 1334 chapter 6 . 1/29/2014
So is this next chapter mainly just about them being in the ghost zone?
How long will they be in there, I wonder?
Ruby 1334 chapter 5 . 1/29/2014
Okay then. Good chappie! ;)
There are quite a few clues about Danny being Phantom now but Mr Lancer still hasn't put two and two together.
Anyways: Now Danny has to save the day! WOOP WOOP! :D
Ruby 1334 chapter 4 . 1/29/2014
Looks like we have a pretty clever ghost boy here! XD
Awesome chapter! Oh! Mr Lancer knows!
And he's going to find out Danny's secret sooner or later!
Ruby 1334 chapter 3 . 1/29/2014
Awesome AS chapter! The whole love jealously thing is really interesting! I wonder how the chat thing is going to go?
Ruby 1334 chapter 2 . 1/29/2014
Awesome chapter! Oh snap! So the ghost who overshadowed Paulina ISN'T Danny! Who is it then!?
I would've thought that Mr Lancer would've pondered on the whole: Invisible thing.
Guess not.
At least not yet.
And he's already getting clues about Danny's secret!
Ruby 1334 chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
I KNEW Paulina was being overshadowed by Danny when Lancer first started talking to her! :D
Woo! I know things!
Anyways: When I first read the summary I just thought that he would find out Danny's (and others.) secrets. But it's even better than that! He can read their minds now! *Laughs evilly*
Let the fun begin!
jim89 chapter 13 . 1/16/2014
well this was truly getting interesting surprises this is marked as complete as it's status
is obviously a ways to go, or is the story is discontinued either way, it feels ashamed end it's here
what happened to The plan and will schemes to fix the relationships work out
he so far been focusing on Sam and Queen bee when's he going to start fixing Valerie
she's just as screwed up as a trio and jazz

It looks like we have such a set up for payoff here but never going to come
Fie chapter 2 . 10/24/2013
You mad Sam respond to some thing said inside Val's head

Great so far
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