| Reviews for Foolish Heart |
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   Higashiyama Sayuri's Devout chapter 2 . 10/23/2009 got to love Kanako she has stile,she is sexy, has strengt and i love the way she dresses. |
| 1v2 chapter 7 . 9/28/2009 this is great you really should continue this story also love how funny it is but could use a bit more Romance |
| Mystic 6 tailed Naruto chapter 1 . 6/30/2008 Kanako is Keitaro's adopted sister. but nice chapter! |
| Wez168 chapter 7 . 6/27/2008 Funny ass story with light hearted perversions. Haha...can't wait for next chapter. Hope you update soon. |
| Love Hina Fanatic chapter 7 . 4/14/2008 very good story, the direction at the end of chapter 7 is going is a bit silly. i do like the fact that you added a bit of ecchi- and the fact that keitaro is a bit randy. keep going when you get the chance |
| ssgohan79 chapter 7 . 3/6/2008 read all the chapters and this is a Awesome Story |
| ssgohan79 chapter 1 . 3/6/2008 Awesome Story |
| Satanic Park of madness chapter 7 . 5/12/2007 Try not to wait us wait that long for the next chapter. This fic is funny and made me almost laugh out loud and cry tears of joy. Its good to see a Kanako/Keitaro fic which are extremely rare. I dont mind personally it is perverse. As you said you yourself it is only in the mindset of that person. What one person may preceive as perversion is humor to another such as myself. If you plan on makig another fic or a squeal to this keep it Kanako/Keitaro pretty please. Get to work on the next chapter soon man. |
| Krimzonrayne chapter 7 . 5/3/2007 You're insane... you're actually insane aren't you? |
| dogbertcarroll chapter 7 . 4/15/2007 How long till Alita demands some of Keitaro as well? |
| Heliosion chapter 7 . 3/22/2007 Utter utter genius! I love this randomness associated with this fic. Its how you describe it in your first chapter. Short zany fun with a romantic twist (although your word choice could be percieved as such when you have an utter fanboy like me running around!) Now onto the serious review. I thought your choice in keeping it zany and avoiding a serious storyline was good considering it was what you set out to do originally. Also your choice of Kanako and Keitaro was another interesting area. It also kept within the boundaries of what you set out to do. I enjoyed the style, the prose and the jokes that showed not just a good fic but the author him or herself. Now onto the points and I hate to do this but Im a wannabe author. I notice the bad or what could be improved about this. Im an authro type fanfiction guy so I tend to um not like fics that do two three lines a paragraph tops. In this case I think it worked in your favour but still its a negative and the last was (inhales then exhales) THERE WASNT ENOUGH MOTOKO! Anyways peace out and I hope you reply to this Just added you to my lists thanks x |
| The Mad shoe1 chapter 7 . 3/4/2007 A bit wierd, but extremly funny, great work! |
| Dannyboy the Dane chapter 7 . 1/29/2007 You, my good sir, have a twisted and very weird kind of humor ... and I like it! I laughed out loud more than one time reading the chapters up to this one, and I'm anxious to see what's coming next, as I can't seem to predict a pattern in your storyline. It changes all the time! Please continue this ASAP, and keep up the good work! Perversion is in the mind! |
| Dragorion chapter 7 . 1/28/2007 I just read the whole story, and I am very digusted...NOT. Great story, funny, perverted as hell, but hey, could be a lot worse. Also, why do I get the feeling that Keitaro will have had his head between all of the Hinata girls legs before this story is over and Motoko gets Kei in between her legs. |
| conlan0414863 chapter 7 . 1/25/2007 keep on typing |