|Reviews for A Shattered Prophecy|
| ChronicMigraine007 chapter 20 . 6/21
This fanfiction is... a work of art. Absolutely beautiful. I can't explain how much this has shaped my life, from when I read it at age 13 to now. I keep coming back to this because of how much it has changed my perspective by looking at things and not only seeing a one-dimensional view. It's difficult to explain. Anyways, I really love the dialogue and I can tell you immersed yourself in this fanfic and really thought about what the character would have said. I would say your writing is more than comparable to JK Rowling's work. (definitely better). I really REALLY enjoyed your work and I hope that you regain the confidence to, if you wish to, continue writing! At least you know you have one die-hard fan here.
With so much love,
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/21
I love the dialogue!
| Binexx chapter 25 . 6/3
Hello Dark Overlord,
Thank you very very much for this great story!
I liked really much because for your good writing steal, interesting plot and just well done composition. Of your writing I like the mix auf discreptiions, direct speech and how you find the balance to decribe certain events. I enjoyed reading from the first to last page. That's rather seldom, when I read fanfictions. Very often, there are lenghts, but here it was just perfect for me.
It was a very sad story...well, you will not contnue the sequel. So this story will remain like it is and let me think auf remorse of murderes. I prefer the first ending. ;)
| AppleSpongeCake chapter 26 . 5/3
No, don't! I love your works!
| Bianca Di Angelo 0 chapter 1 . 5/1
That doesn't sound like the Voldemort we all know and hate.
| Thomarry chapter 19 . 4/20
If this is how you treat yourself, I'm glad you gave up fanfiction. Honestly, I'm going to be real honest with you: I am disappointed in you. giving up your stories just because you got a few dislikes.
Do you think we would have had Harry Potter at all if Rowling just gave in to the negativity? Wherever there are fans, there will be haters, I do hope you've grown to realize that.
You may not have had the best writing style, but that's why you work to improve! You DO tell a good story, and you had the fans to prove it, but you decided to get distraught instead.
This isn't a diss on you, I'm just disappointed that potential great writers like yourself let people get to you enough that you'd punish those who actually enjoyed and vouched for your stories. In the end, you didn't prove anything, you merely let those people win.
You punished your fans and let the naysayers win. That's what you did.
| moosejuice5 chapter 14 . 4/16
Gave up on this fic about half way through this chapter, 'I envy the dead' seriously? This fic I well written but I hate Harry's personality
| MimiTaylor chapter 26 . 4/6
I am glad I got to read your stories before they are removed. I enjoyed having a 'not so happy ending' for a change and think your writing style is just fine. Continued luck on your original endeavors.
| L'usine.c0m chapter 26 . 1/22
I understand you disappointment in being judged on your writing, in my opinion I don't see why you waste your time even thinking of those who do so. You have intriguing plot, mysterious writing witch it self make a story. And of course you'll have some gramma mistakes, it's what make's you human. I've seen gramma mistakes in published works, even in Harry Potter himself ("blonde" when it should be "blond" for a guy (Draco)). My personal opinion is that your story is amazing, it shows depth in character. Sometimes writers forget the importance of mental health. I hope you never let anyone get you down.
I wish you all the luck...)
Knowledge is power.
| natalieeannee chapter 24 . 1/1
I really admire that you made the potters/black remain positive about Harry. On Harry's side.
(well.. kind of.. there was that one part "so this is the end" which I don't quite understand.).
the flying scene was great.
| natalieeannee chapter 24 . 1/1
interesting story.. had me reading it to the end...
I like Dorian the best!
Confused by the ending, but okay!. Interesting to read.
I'm team "Harry chooses redemption". But okay!
Dumbledore is cruel. But true. so that's good.
Interesting the "Devil" card in divination class! very cool.
I enjoyed the first half of the story more than the second half.
Thanks for writing! Cheers.
| natalieeannee chapter 6 . 12/31/2015
aww! Dorian, quite the charmer! I really enjoyed his and Lily's conversation at Diagon Alley!
| Enji-Benjy chapter 6 . 11/16/2015
This was supposed to be attached to my last review...
Why do authors always do that in 'dramatic' moments, have all the characters forget how to fight. It happens in books, TV and movies as well, not just fanfic, but come on! A STINGING hex? In a fight for your life, you use a stinging hex? As soon as that happened I knew what what the outcome of the 'fight' would be. You don't have an assassin suddenly turn into an 11 year old school kid in a playground fight for any reason other than wanting them to fail. It's ridiculous.
| enji-benjy chapter 6 . 11/16/2015
I do hope you don't make this all angsty and have them try and turn Harry back to the 'Light'.
| enji-benjy chapter 2 . 11/16/2015
This chapter is confusing for several reason, firstly there is no indication of how much time has passed since the last chapter. Secondly, how did Ron and Hermione become friends? You can't say it was Neville since his parents were also killed in this fic so his Gran would have raised him, leaving him the same terminally shy boy as in canon.