Well now, months to have his rigid controls battered and his world-view questioned may be a reasonable way to have a believable change in Harry. Nothing thus far has made more than a dent.

Quite a few grammatical errors in these last few chapters, this being the worst so far.

That said, the character development is coming along reasonably well.

The optimism of dumbles truly astonishes me... No, Harry has not killed for pleasure, but he has been raised to be a soldier, a weapon. Escaping will be his one and only objective... though I suppose it will take him some time since he will need to plan as he only has one shot before Azkaban awaits.

Wow, Snape still wants Harry dead more than anything (as long as it's not directly at his hand to inflame the life debt) and is even willing to risk voldy's rath to allow it!
Look at Your timing... Snape was instructed by voldy within minutes of Harry's capture, an hour at the most.
Harry slept the better part of a day, awoke, had the kitchen confrontation, then slept some more. Let's say 6 hours at a minimum, to be ridiculously generous.
Snape let all that time pass, and more, knowing that he had been ordered to give a message to Harry from voldy - and he's smart enough to work out the meaning of that message.
Now, take the above, can you give me any alternative to my conclusions?

Nice bridge chapter.

Huh... so, actual feelings. With his previous order to kill himself if captured, I felt it was pretty clear that voldy only saw Harry as a tool, an implement of war. What would cause this sudden change?

The lost battle indeed! I do wonder why nobody has thought to restrain the assassin though, a rather major oversight.

Very engaging chapter, the seeds of doubt have been sewn, but they aren't in anything close to fertile ground. Yet.

The chapter brings up a few questions, but overall pretty straight-forward.

What on earth? That was horribly done :(
If the point of protecting him was also to capture Harry, then why wasn't dumbles there? Why hadn't they enacted actual security to keep him from leaving?
Have one of the better fighters poly-juiced as Pierce to give him more of a fighting chance? A dozen other options occur to me the longer I write this and that's just one guy in mere minutes.
The main point I'm trying to make is that They Set The Trap... They had time and resources and many minds to consider and plan... except, to read this nonsense, it looks more like Harry designed it and they stepped in blind.
Simply terrible.

Intriguing and not just a little creepy, but not over-the-top like many dark!HP

*blinks*
Oh. Well, that was not what I expected!

I hope harry stays on Voldemort’s side. Also I do love it when supremacy is justified, rather than just be a prejudice, but it’s up to you in the end.

A stinging hex?! Rolled my eyes so hard when I read that, I think I might've done permanent damage. Ridiculous.

*sight*... "he will no it is a trap". this is a new one for me, writing 'no' instead of 'know'