I do hope you don't make this all angsty and have them try and turn Harry back to the 'Light'.

This chapter is confusing for several reason, firstly there is no indication of how much time has passed since the last chapter. Secondly, how did Ron and Hermione become friends? You can't say it was Neville since his parents were also killed in this fic so his Gran would have raised him, leaving him the same terminally shy boy as in canon.

Why hasn't Lucius been arrested, after all he did turn up at the Ministry with a kidnapped child? and why didn't the Potters report the kidnapping to the Ministry? James is an Auror.

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"Albus, he belongs is Azkaban." Again, with the grammar, ANYONE HERE CARE ABOUT GRAMMAR?

You side? Come ON! Grammar, people! Who here cares about it? Lemme see a show of hands.

This was an awesome story! It was so engrossing that I stayed up reading it. I especially liked the character development. All of the characters seem so realistic, especially Harry's eventual breaking under Dumbledore. I can tell how much work you put into the plot, character, and setting development of this story to make it the fabulous.

I hope you return to fanfiction to write more, although I respect your desicion if you choose not to. You should write for you, not for the readers, and I hope some negative reviews aren't the reason you stop writing.

Keep writing!

awesome story

I'm not sure if you'll ever read this review, since it's likely you don't check your account anymore, but I would like to say in the strongest terms possible that you are a strong, brilliant writer, and despite any negative comments you may have received, I believe your work shows incredible skill, and I know you will be successful in your writing endeavors. There will always be those who hate, and those who doubt, because there is criticism for every masterpiece, but as long as you stay strong, you can continue to prove them wrong.

Nooo! Please keep this Amazing story here!

Noooo! I never review but this story is simply too amazing not too. Please continue this amazing piece of work, and ignore those idiots who detest it. Some people , unlike those fools, actually love your story!

A stinging hex And other jinxes in the battle? seriously? Harry fiered 3-4 spells at the start and was catching his breath? Knocked out few minutes after coming by a misdirected spell? Right now he doesnt really seem that powerful and badass heir of voldemort. and it seams you dont understand the difference between hexes, curses and jinxes (voldemort cursed the dada job not hexed). It seems very rushed and and the communication between characters is very wierd and again, rushed. Reactions to situations are also unlikely in my opinion. There are also few grammar mistakes that seem to be the result of carelessness but nothing major. I will keep reading for now though becsuse i know that this is a good story but i just felt the need to point out some of the things that have really bothered me so far.

in medias rez int always bad, but skipping decades of significant stuff happening is bad form

props to wormtail for remembering old freindships, and voldemort for shattering the prophecy

Maybe tell us your published book names. I'd really like to read them.
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sorry just had an urge to do that