Reviews for ami mizuno's dance of sexual confusion
Ashen Author chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Hilarious. I love stories that play with Zoi's varying gender.
JBubbles chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
hahaha, that was so ingenious! The funny confusion and strange feelings were light and teasing and perfect for that approach.

I loved it so much!
SailorCopperOwl chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
That was so wonderful, first her confusion when she thinks College Girl is a girl, then her refusal to un-confuse again and finally they're both happy together, awww... and I love that you preserve so much of the anime Zoisite in this. Loved it.
JPandS chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
I loved this so much! I would comment more on why but I'm just too amazed by how good this was! Awesome job!
wickedtrue chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
I really liked this! Ami questioning herself, playing chess against herself to figure out her own thoughts. And then, she gets up her courage and RUNS AWAY. So cute! The cross dressing was a surprise, but it was great to hear that conversation in Ami's head how that doesn't "undo" any of her thoughts.

Awesome fic!
Blue Lagoon Loon chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Hilarious and entertaining. Of course, in my world, we're all a little lesbian for Zoisite, whether he is dressed as a woman or not. *lol*
DavisJes chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I liked this fic very much.

"But Ami had wanted to check, just in case her mother harbored bad feelings over the fact that her husband had left her for a man."

That is too funny and I thought I was the only one who came up with that idea as of why Ami's father left. I was writing the end to my fic of how her parents meet and I was at the part where her father said he was leaving. As I was writing it just popped in my head that he was leaving because he was gay.
Witchy-grrl chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Wow, I read this story ages ago, and I never reviewed to gush about how amazing it was? I'm sorry! :(

But just so you know, it's in my favorites, because it always makes me smile. :D
DanceOfTheEnt-Wives chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
okay, that was weird, ... but it does take care of the fact that those stupid people made zoisite a girl! just because he-she flirted with that other dude!
K. Wyse chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
I saw the title in the Shitennou C2 comm and I went to myself, I just have to read this fic.

I couldn't stop giggling to myself as I read this story. It's by far one of my favourite Ami/Zoi stories ever. It's original, creative, well-written and well-paced. Congratulations on a job well done.

I really, really enjoyed it, and it's going on my Favourite Stories list.

love, Wyse
ms. commas and ampersands chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
I told you this on LJ, but I'm telling you this here as well: that was fabulous. Best "senshi is sexually confused" fic EVER, and I have had the misfortune of reading plenty that fell short. It was made ten times better with Zoisite in drag. I think you really captured how Ami would approach the situation from an analytical point of view. Also, I am eternally jealous that I didn't think to make Ami's dad gay. That would be so awesome! Ugh, damn you and your awesomeness.

And now that I have found you on I shall peruse your other writings rather than do anything productive. Whee! Distraction!
chosenformyself chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
You know when I looked at this I thought it would be a humorous fanfic so I was all up for a good laugh, but then when I started to read it I realized that it really wasn't, I felt kind of disappointed because it was so poorly written and kind of just plain stupid I am sorry
jaded image chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
First, I'd just like to say that shimmied is a funny word. I laughed when I read it...I'm just strange like that, I suppose.

Anyway, this was an interesting read, to say the least. Ami's sexual confusion is confusing me as well. The one thing that I want to know is why Zoi is dressed as a woman. Perhaps there's a story behind that one too?

Either way, I enjoyed reading this mesh of Ami's confusing journey through her discovery of her sexual orientation. I can't wait to read more of your works.
Prometheus FireBringer chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
You write like you paint with a brush. Every stroke of a sentence brings in a wonderful picture.
SlipperyLiz chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
This is wonderful. I like the very matter-of-fact style, and Ami's trains of thought are entertaining. Good stuff.
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