Reviews for When Enemies Unite
usagi-strike chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
Bwuahahahahah! Oh gosh, this was awesome. I love your OC, she's fucking great! And you have the best Amelda/Kaiba fics (almost the only ones, that are rated M).
You're fucking fabulous.
Cosmic Kiss chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
This. Was. SEXY! I loved it! Mostly cause of how you portrayed Alister/Amelda and Kaiba. I was also wondering if you could read my Alister/AmelaXOC story. My OC is called Hazel Valentine and she's Mai's younger sister.

It takes place during the Doma ark. Please read it.
demon.of.music chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
The main reason I adore this is because it reminds me of Twisted Games of Fate. *starts sobbing* Ra, I loved that story - the best YGO fanfiction I've ever read.
OTP chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Holy hell that was hot. Great job my dear!
SPF15 chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Okay... Who the hell is Mira? From my observations she appears to be a sudden OC who alternately bitches at and sleeps with a large array of male YGO characters. Of course, she's sexy and feisty and has sun-kissed skin, like most "I'm-so-confident-and-desirable" Mary Sues.

Mira Night belongs in a cheap paperback romance or a bad sex-sitcom and you should keep her there.
AmeldaSeto Fan chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
An OC? Mweh. Still, love the smut!
Pearl of the Dark Age chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
Wow! Steamy! You sure know how to keep up the suspense.
mesmerized67levender chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
a very well written story and good OC. I like Mira a lot!